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Model
Winnie L
Posts: 5,867
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


Love opinion on them please. smile

1
https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-J4puGhv46Yc/UHKXHexQkeI/AAAAAAAAFMU/Xh6uBqXwodA/s720/palor4.jpg

2
https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-VyfV6xCJSPY/UHKWwSRGbiI/AAAAAAAAFL8/RrCe6848puY/s512/palor3.jpg

3
https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-n7KnCRj-tJ0/UHKWwxIqNmI/AAAAAAAAFME/CjnH1haETi8/s512/palor1.jpg

4

https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-ulG8vkdKdi0/UHKXLA-N1fI/AAAAAAAAFMk/qgPKKZW1nIs/s512/palor2.jpg

and my avi big_smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 0#30203860

All opinions welcome. Was thinking of adding one more to my portfolio, but not sure which.

Thanks!
Oct 08 12 02:09 am  Link  Quote 
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Anna Adrielle
Posts: 18,762
Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium


totally love number 2!!

EDIT and the avi as well smile
Oct 08 12 02:10 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Victoria Gevorkov
Posts: 94
Kansas City, Missouri, US


NUMBER 2 - love love love
Oct 08 12 02:12 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Winnie L
Posts: 5,867
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


Thank you! I was digging 2 as well.
Oct 08 12 02:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dave phoenix
Posts: 1,257
Phoenix, Arizona, US


i like 2, and 1 is not terrible either.

i'd suggest you be more intentional with your facial expressions, and try to make both hands visible.

i think 2 would be better if your hair was behind your shoulders so we could see more of what you're wearing, and it'd be nice to see your hidden hand, too.
Oct 08 12 02:51 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Winnie L
Posts: 5,867
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


dave phoenix wrote:
i like 2, and 1 is not terrible either.

i'd suggest you be more intentional with your facial expressions, and try to make both hands visible.

i think 2 would be better if your hair was behind your shoulders so we could see more of what you're wearing, and it'd be nice to see your hidden hand, too.

thank you smile I agree the hand should be shown more. And my expression too.

Oct 08 12 05:29 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Shirley Zhong
Posts: 2,156
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


1. I'm not very fond of it, due to how your neck is disappearing into your body.
Oct 08 12 07:16 am  Link  Quote 
Model
C A T H Y
Posts: 5,464
Anaheim, California, US


love #2!! smile
Oct 08 12 10:57 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Winnie L
Posts: 5,867
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


Thanks all.

I have eh, another picture I got back that I was thinking of adding or replacing something else in my portfolio. Can anyone be so kind as to help? Thought that I need more casual looking looks.

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-TW9- … n09sml.jpg
Oct 08 12 09:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dannielle Levan
Posts: 12,857
New Westminster, British Columbia, Canada


I love 1 & 2, but you need more strength and intensity in your expressions and poses.
Oct 08 12 10:56 pm  Link  Quote 
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