Lessee, you are a 'fashion stylist' right? You need images that show off your fashion 'sense' in a very positive light.
So I look at this image in your portfolio.
and about the only fashion I see is her hat. It's a nice hat (as far as I can tell... it's mostly a black blob), but what does it co-ordinate with? And then there's that unfortunate shadow on her nose that makes it look like there is a bump on her nose... It can be 'fixed' but it wasn't... And you picked it to put in your portfolio.
Just my opinion.