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Angela Perez
Posts: 340
Orlando, Florida, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121008/15/5073506b182a4.jpg
Oct 08 12 04:59 pm  Link  Quote 
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Good Egg Productions
Posts: 15,072
Orlando, Florida, US


It's gorgeous work.

The only criticism I can give is that the earrings appear to be out of place.  It would probably be a giant pain in the anus, but I think that removing them would keep my eye from focusing on that instead of all the clean, smooth lines you've created.
Oct 08 12 05:10 pm  Link  Quote 
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Angela Perez
Posts: 340
Orlando, Florida, US


Good Egg Productions wrote:
It's gorgeous work.

The only criticism I can give is that the earrings appear to be out of place.  It would probably be a giant pain in the anus, but I think that removing them would keep my eye from focusing on that instead of all the clean, smooth lines you've created.

Thanks

I was going to remove them because they are definitely out of place but because it was just practice and implementing the new aqcquired techniques I was like what the hell I don't want to spend more time on it lol and I didn't bother with them. but definitely once I decide to work on a real piece I will pay close attention to detail and remove things like that.

Thanks again smile

Oct 08 12 05:15 pm  Link  Quote 
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ColourFool
Posts: 1,649
Breda, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands


I think the point is that this has the potential to be a real piece ..
Oct 08 12 05:25 pm  Link  Quote 
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ChelleyCredible Retouch
Posts: 448
Boston, Massachusetts, US


I don't see how the earring is out of place unless I am missing the point of where...but either way this is an awesome image. I have no complaints.
Oct 09 12 12:58 am  Link  Quote 
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Mike Needham Retouching
Posts: 369
Cheltenham, England, United Kingdom


It feels churlish even saying this, but; perhaps more specular type highlights. More plastic is what I'm thinking.

Still great edit
Oct 09 12 11:50 am  Link  Quote 
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Joe Diamond
Posts: 269
Bucharest, Bucharest, Romania


It doesnt look realistic, and if it can be seen to this small size, bigger size would be worse. Maybe learn about light  shadows and color
Oct 14 12 07:45 am  Link  Quote 
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Angela Perez
Posts: 340
Orlando, Florida, US


OK
Oct 14 12 08:32 am  Link  Quote 
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