Bluefin Photography wrote:
On all of the photos, I'd personally like to see more separation between the model's hair and the dark background. You could do it with some lighting on the background itself, a lighter background, or some type of rim lighting from behind.
But really, it's hard to give you serious critique on that set, since each individual image is so small. So I guess that's my critique, having so many images in a horizontal set ruins it for me.