I made a thread in the other "serious critique" you can let it die.
Its seems this forum gets more traffic!

Anyway...

I am an amateur, aspiring fashion, beauty, portrait photographer.
It would be great to hear from you all more experienced photographers what is working and what is not in my port! i doubled up on pictures so i could fit more in for a critique.

spam is the people's enemy

wtf

Keep at it. You seem to have a good feel for lighting and a rapport with your model (models?). You just need to show more work with a variety of models.

Thank you :-)
Yeah I haven't worked with any professional models yet, just shooting my friends for now!

How can I improve on the technical side?

You have very photogenic friends! I like your style. Some of the cropping is a little too tight in places (or a little "off"), but you're doing a great job!

Thank you!

Could you give me specific examples so I know what I'm doing wrong?

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