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Joshua MacNeal
Posts: 6
Glen Ellyn, Illinois, US


Hi,

I'm a fine art photographer but I blend fashion into my work too. I would like an honest critique, which images you like or dislike, and where you think I should go with my work.
Oct 13 12 04:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,404
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/10/5075b1e6d02a3_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/10/5075b12bb3c8a_m.jpg
You seem to compose with too much space above the models head

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/10/5075b37debfa4_m.jpg
This is a very busy background

Wish you continued success
Oct 13 12 05:40 pm  Link  Quote 
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DVP Photography
Posts: 2,845
Broomfield, Colorado, US


My critique is don't ask for so many multiple critiques... three threads so far.  Makes me dizzy.
Oct 15 12 09:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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David Kirk
Posts: 4,398
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


You have only one image which appeals to me:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/10/5075b1e6d02a3_m.jpg

So, for me I would say more like this and less of the others.
Oct 15 12 10:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ImageFusionStudio
Posts: 189
Fort Worth, Texas, US


Most of the works don't connect with me ... even on the basis of "art".  The BWs dont have a strong tonal range (they could be kinda hot) take a look at the "zone system"  and see if that improves your vision.
Oct 21 12 06:35 am  Link  Quote 
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