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Photographer
Studio FMII
Posts: 4
Branford, Connecticut, US


Any comments positive & negative, like & dislike.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121020/18/5083550c00354_m.jpg

Thank you.
Oct 20 12 07:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
CMA Imaging
Posts: 16
Ringgold, Georgia, US


I'm far from being an expert but in my humble opinion...I think other than the model having a blank expression its a good image of her. I don't feel the background is appropriate to her wardrobe  however. I like how the sign is positioned so you know where it is but can't see all of it but she doesn't look like she should be standing there. Perhaps she would be better suited to be in town shopping or at a nice restaurant. You have some great work in your port, I would say this would be your weakest image.

Again its just my opinion..you do really nice work, best of luck!
Oct 20 12 10:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


Not good. You cut off her hands. The color balance is way off.
Oct 20 12 11:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Charger Photography
Posts: 1,701
San Antonio, Texas, US


Orca Bay Images wrote:
Not good. You cut off her hands. The color balance is way off.

I agree with Orca ... and the background looks too PS... the previous image on your port with the same dress looks more natural.

Oct 20 12 11:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
David Kirk
Posts: 4,400
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


I like the concept, but honestly I had to work a little too hard to get it.  At first glance it just appears as a dour looking model standing near/in area 51.  It took me a while to notice the tattoo/marking.  If I wasn't critiquing the photo I never would have that much patience with it.
Oct 21 12 06:51 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Studio FMII
Posts: 4
Branford, Connecticut, US


Thank you all so much for all your straightforward opinion.  I appreciate everyone of them. I am experimenting with photoshop.  I sort of felt she had an alien expression in this shot. Maybe not smile  Wish you all have a good weekend.
Oct 21 12 08:05 am  Link  Quote 
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