this image has an awkward expression and pose, not sure what the story here is and I am not intrigued to find out. some nice images in your port otherwise.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 9#28652809
I love most of your work there, this one seems a bit unexciting for me though, compared to how well you do amazing photo themes. I know it's probably suggesting "relaxed" but feels a bit...too relaxed if you will..
JohnsPhotos wrote: this image has an awkward expression and pose, not sure what the story here is and I am not intrigued to find out. some nice images in your port otherwise.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 9#28652809
The photo in the first reply was in my humble opinion by far the worst. Cute girl, cute concept but it has no place in your port. Also the last one in your portfolio.. Something about it strikes me as inherently wrong. Her expression or maybe how large the frame is compared to her body. Great concept wonderful colors but it still seems very.. Blegh and off for some reason. Other than that you have a beautiful vibrant portfolio!
Brownlager Photography wrote: I love most of your work there, this one seems a bit unexciting for me though, compared to how well you do amazing photo themes. I know it's probably suggesting "relaxed" but feels a bit...too relaxed if you will..
Gita Lei wrote: The photo in the first reply was in my humble opinion by far the worst. Cute girl, cute concept but it has no place in your port. Also the last one in your portfolio.. Something about it strikes me as inherently wrong. Her expression or maybe how large the frame is compared to her body. Great concept wonderful colors but it still seems very.. Blegh and off for some reason. Other than that you have a beautiful vibrant portfolio!
Goat Farm Project wrote: Which pics have to go? Tell me straight up and I will LIST your best pic.
Curious what you think. I'll edit this with my thoughts in a moment.
I think the first one should go, even though I actually like it. It doesn't seem to fit what you're trying to do. It looks like a nice "no makeup, unretouched" picture a model would use, while you seem to be aiming for something different.
This one is pretty "natural" looking, but still more polished. I really like it.
Curious what you think. I'll edit this with my thoughts in a moment.
I think the first one should go, even though I actually like it. It doesn't seem to fit what you're trying to do. It looks like a nice "no makeup, unretouched" picture a model would use, while you seem to be aiming for something different.
This one is pretty "natural" looking, but still more polished. I really like it.
Yep, good feedback. thanks!
This one is my favorite. So natural and "unposed" looking...