I would say I am semi-new to modeling, and would like to improve the craft. I would like a full portfolio critique.
I edit my own photos/retouch (with Photographer's okay) and have had some say it is horrible, some say it is out of date, some say it's amazing. I find myself in agreement with fairly good editing, but your opinion/qritique is welcome and wanted!
If you critique make sure your really doing so correctly!
I know I have a couple of flaws, and would like to know what to work on.
I looked through your portfolio and saw you had certainly some adventures: bodypaint and posing with a waterfall backdrop. The waterfall shot should have been a killer moment, but the angle and expression of your face, and the actual pose doesn't sell the image and if you retouched that, then your participation in that disaster is almost complete.
You need to study your angles-what angles you look best from. Although there is a market for nude models, your portfolio doesn't represent you well. I would advise that you get ride of them soon and replace them with something that will attract paying clients, presuming you can tell what photographers will bring out your best looks, etc.
Your retouching skills are woeful at present. It may be that the photos could not be radically improved but you don't seem to have a good retoucher's gift for balancing colours, for tonality, and I think for the future you should endeavour to find photograhers who can deliver great images to you.
To tell you the truth, I feel no interest in even opening a thumb nail in your port as all the pics look so flawed from the photography stand point and so heavily retouched from your stand point (trying to save the photographer I guess). I also don't see a clean pic of your face to see what you really look like and you have no joy in your face in any photo.