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Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Post and I'll select a representative photo of yours and point out at least one good thing and one bad thing about it. (don't post if the majority of your portfolio is nudes)

If you find my reply useful, feel free to help me out as well.
Nov 06 12 12:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Autumn Rose Brightly
Posts: 1,072
Crowley, Texas, US


I would greatly appreciate you input smile
Nov 06 12 12:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ariel Yu
Posts: 42
Los Angeles, California, US


I'd love to know your opinion
Nov 06 12 01:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
I would greatly appreciate you input smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121016/08/507d7abaf1131_m.jpg

Good: What has potential to be a good smile if practiced and developed
Bad: Clumsy, apparently thoughtless posing

Nov 06 12 01:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
000---000
Posts: 706
Alberta, Alabama, US


Interested!
Nov 06 12 01:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Ariel Yu wrote:
I'd love to know your opinion

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121008/14/50734b8ac79c7_m.jpg

Good: quality photography lets us see you well
Bad: mostly you just sort of stand around, occasionally with one arm in your hair; develop some poses

Nov 06 12 01:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
In Balance Photography
Posts: 3,370
Boston, Massachusetts, US


I'm in smile
Nov 06 12 01:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


LizaK wrote:
Interested!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121025/00/5088eddf18726_m.jpg

Good: quirky, unique look can result in charming, delightful expressions
Bad: we don't get much of a sense of your body or posing ability

Nov 06 12 01:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Maria Susanti
Posts: 535
Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia


tell me?
Nov 06 12 01:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


I'd be honored if you hit me with some feedback.

:bracing:
Nov 06 12 01:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


In Balance Photography wrote:
I'm in smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120929/13/506759aea6893_m.jpg

Good: high quality, sharp, good colours, captivating
Bad: all let down by a lack of that final level of retouching polish, so that it becomes actually unflattering to the model

Nov 06 12 01:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Rhiana Gray
Posts: 61
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


I would love your feedback.
Nov 06 12 01:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Maria Susanti wrote:
tell me?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121031/13/509189dc2d3ac_m.jpg

Good: can look cute as a button
Bad: you look best in this self-pic because the retouching/make-up in your others obliterates the shape of your face

Nov 06 12 01:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Orca Bay Images wrote:
I'd be honored if you hit me with some feedback.

:bracing:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091119/23/4b0644a73b646_m.jpg

Good: you got an interesting expression out of this girl
Bad: the lighting and retouching are bad/indifferent and she looks like some random amateur girl

Nov 06 12 01:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Yin L
Posts: 264
London, England, United Kingdom


Yes please!
Nov 06 12 01:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


Sendu wrote:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091119/23/4b0644a73b646_m.jpg

Good: you got an interesting expression out of this girl
Bad: the lighting and retouching are bad/indifferent and she looks like some random amateur girl

Thank you for your feedback!

Nov 06 12 01:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lela Jesse
Posts: 1,148
Arcata, California, US


I would love if you could do this for me. smile
Thank you!
Nov 06 12 01:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Rhiana Gray wrote:
I would love your feedback.

Hard to pick a representative photo; you're all over the place.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120609/13/4fd3af01f2e95_m.jpg

Good: you can look really good, with just the right expression to beguile
Bad: a lot of the time, expression and pose misses the mark resulting in something, if not quite unflattering, then at least boring

Nov 06 12 01:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Yin L wrote:
Yes please!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120820/15/5032b4587e053_m.jpg

Good: you know how to pose and emote, are adventurous and when it works, it really works amazingly well
Bad: but when it misses the mark, it can be really quite horrible (but this is more about shot selection by the photographer I think)

Nov 06 12 01:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Lela Jesse wrote:
I would love if you could do this for me. smile
Thank you!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110629/00/4e0acfa87a277_m.jpg

Good: can look lovely in unforced "candid" poses
Bad: almost every time you look directly into camera you get something that verges on the horrible

Nov 06 12 01:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
HEATHER 19
Posts: 1,125
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Sounds -good and helpful
Nov 06 12 01:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


HEATHER 18 wrote:
Sounds -good and helpful

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120508/14/4fa98eca20af9_m.jpg

Good: body
Bad: dull, lifeless expression

Nov 06 12 01:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lela Jesse
Posts: 1,148
Arcata, California, US


Sendu wrote:

Lela Jesse wrote:
I would love if you could do this for me. smile
Thank you!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110629/00/4e0acfa87a277_m.jpg

Good: can look lovely in unforced "candid" poses
Bad: almost every time you look directly into camera you get something that verges on the horrible [/quote

Thank you very much. smile

Nov 06 12 01:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Maruschke
Posts: 543
Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand


Me? :-)
Nov 06 12 03:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Claire- Marie
Posts: 148
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US


Please!
Nov 06 12 03:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Maggie Xia
Posts: 452
Atlanta, Georgia, US


could you please take a look at my port please? smile
Nov 06 12 03:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
MissLaurelle
Posts: 3,532
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


Ouh I wanna know please big_smile

Second profile 18+ : http://www.modelmayhem.com/2404888
Nov 06 12 04:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Tim Foster
Posts: 1,749
New York, New York, US


I'd love a critique.
Nov 06 12 06:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,490
New York, New York, US


Sure!
Nov 06 12 06:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lily Darling
Posts: 1,299
Lansing, Michigan, US


Would love the input!
Nov 06 12 06:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
MB Jen B
Posts: 2,850
Clarksville, Tennessee, US


I like your "Good" and "Bad" advice.

My port is mostly non-nude.
Thank you,
Jen
p.s. however, I think I already know what the 'bad' is but, I'm working on it and would like to see what you say.
Nov 06 12 06:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lynn Elizabeth
Posts: 1,336
Coral Springs, Florida, US


I can use some advice.
Nov 06 12 08:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Murad rm Photography
Posts: 676
London, England, United Kingdom


yah go on smile
Nov 06 12 08:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Chantel Storm II
Posts: 80
Bloomington, Illinois, US


Would like to know. smile
Nov 06 12 08:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Prestigeshots
Posts: 211
Austin, Texas, US


I'd like to know, thanks!
Nov 06 12 09:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Maruschke wrote:
Me? :-)

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090521/21/4a16234bce4a2_m.jpg

Good: smile can look cute when not strained too far
Bad: most photos look a little amateurish

Nov 06 12 11:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Steve Wall
Posts: 623
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


OK, hit me smile
Nov 06 12 11:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sendu
Posts: 3,499
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom


Claire- Marie wrote:
Please!

You look like 2 completely different people in your port, so it's hard to pick a representative photo; which is the real you?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110820/17/4e50512fa64bd_m.jpg

Good: you can look pretty in a natural commercial-style shoot
Bad: much less effective at other things

Nov 06 12 11:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Semele
Posts: 161
Brussels, Brussels, Belgium


Would love to know!
Nov 07 12 12:35 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Ashley Canright
Posts: 45
Houston, Texas, US


Hey!

I'd love to know what you think! Go for it big_smile
Nov 07 12 09:11 am  Link  Quote 
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