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D Massey
Posts: 33
San Javier, Murcia, Spain


Hi guys,

i'm looking for some serious harsh critique, please rate me 1-10, tell me which photo is my best and my worst.

Cheers smile
Nov 07 12 07:05 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jean Renard Photography
Posts: 2,009
Los Angeles, California, US


I could only rate you against what you MIGHT become if you worked with great people and did all the things you need to do to make yourself great, on that scale you'd be a 2 right now.

The shots are not great and you are not doing anything in them.  You have a solid look the short hair, with large eyes allow you to be lazy and do nothing but look back at the camera and little else.   You need to emote a lot more.

You are busty as well which is distracting for now.  Start using your facial expressions and then work towards the body language. 
Work with fashion pros and get a great make up artist.
Nov 07 12 01:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,400
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


None of your photos are 10’s or 9’s  and none of them are 1’s or 2’s, so you lie some where in the middle.

In all of your images you just about have the same expression

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120821/05/503379ae8cb03_m.jpg
Will call this the best from a modeling stand point

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120817/06/502e47009f939_m.jpg
Least best
Some kind of junk to photo left of models head on wall, and at front “V” of sweater
Top makes the over all appearance as kind of a frumpy look

Wish you well
Nov 07 12 02:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DEP E510
Posts: 1,468
Miramar, Florida, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120821/05/5033796dd3199.jpg

you have a nice face, great hair, and nice curves.

at least a 7.5
Nov 09 12 02:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Christina Josephine
Posts: 121
Warsaw, Indiana, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120817/06/502e465eee3c7_m.jpg

Favorite. You have a beautiful jaw line and a really nice figure.
Nov 09 12 11:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Image Magik
Posts: 1,067
New Orleans, Louisiana, US


You have a cute look but you need to work on your posing and facial expressions more as well as wardrobe. Right now every picture is a similar look. 2-3 at this point.
Nov 09 12 11:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
D Massey
Posts: 33
San Javier, Murcia, Spain


Thank you all for your help! After looking through my port I also noticed that my facial expression is the same in all the photos, I will soon be adding a few more shots I have.
So when you have a chance please check my profile again and let me knpow what you think.

xxx
Nov 13 12 02:52 am  Link  Quote 
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