login info join!
Forums > Critique > Serious Critique > What needs the most work? Search   Reply
Photographer
Dave Luyando
Posts: 22
Spring, Texas, US


Ignore this post...moved to correct header.
Nov 08 12 05:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,549
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120905/13/5047b7b82a75c_m.jpg
Less head tilt
More detail in black area of hair
Nov 09 12 05:25 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DEP E510
Posts: 1,518
Miramar, Florida, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120905/13/5047b80e1e997.jpg

your work is much better overall than this..

it is completely weak, unfocused, and not typical of your quality.
Nov 09 12 02:26 pm  Link  Quote 
  Search   Reply



main | browse | casting/travel | forums | shout box | help | advertising | contests | share | join the mayhem

more modelmayhem on: | | | edu

©2006-2014 ModelMayhem.com. All Rights Reserved.
MODEL MAYHEM is a registered trademark.
Toggle Worksafe Mode: Off | On
Terms | Privacy | Careers