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Model
Winnie L
Posts: 5,867
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


What do you think? The photographer wanted to try a different feel of a woman escaping from urbanism, and looking lost at the end when she has no way out. Please let me know any feedback you might have.

PS. the montages are made by photographer.

https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-9gCZOaJg-TY/UJxiy_xo0nI/AAAAAAAAFOw/_Npiu0RFmjU/s600/65391_10151246830668464_1623834050_n.jpg

https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-9RXagVkEg8A/UJxiy61s7KI/AAAAAAAAFOs/tlhxqfye5Nw/s600/531086_10151246830853464_205991008_n.jpg

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-hqOsYWmG4O0/UJxiy5j3dCI/AAAAAAAAFO0/ruy6q6hiE00/s600/534707_10151246831318464_609682057_n.jpg
Nov 08 12 06:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


The photographer wanted to try a different feel of a woman escaping from urbanism, and looking lost at the end when she has no way out.

Other than the center-row left images, I don't get any such feel from the model. The poses are largely stock poses and the model is expressionless. Far from looking like she's trapped by her surroundings, she seems to be posing off them.

Nov 08 12 06:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
D0127H
Posts: 1,135
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


Bottom left and top....GREAT.  I wouldn't blink if I saw them in the kind of magazines I like ; )
Nov 08 12 06:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Winnie L
Posts: 5,867
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


Thank you. I admit I could look more "trapped". wink
Nov 08 12 06:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
sospix
Posts: 21,189
Orlando, Florida, US


All work for me except the middle right image, seems a bit too posed, and doesn't really express the visual intent to me  .  .  .  nice departure though  .  .  .

SOS
Nov 09 12 06:14 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Winnie L
Posts: 5,867
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


sospix wrote:
All work for me except the middle right image, seems a bit too posed, and doesn't really express the visual intent to me  .  .  .  nice departure though  .  .  .

SOS

thanks wink

Nov 09 12 08:53 pm  Link  Quote 
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