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Andrew James Makeup
Posts: 335
Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom


I only want constructive i know a lot of people just like to go thats crap thats bad should have done this and that smile

Anyway i did this at a recent shoot was quite happy with it
((the photographer said he used a "beauty dish" which gives the more glowy/shiny look))

http://i50.tinypic.com/swec7s.jpg
Nov 09 12 05:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,400
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121109/17/509dab6a700ab_m.jpg
Since you are the Makeup Artist, the only question would be about the models fingernails, they seem plain rather then the expected long polished elegant nails this look screams for.

Side note pointing the fingers at the camera will make them appear shorter
Nov 09 12 06:35 pm  Link  Quote 
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TinRoses
Posts: 188
Scottsdale, Arizona, US


Lee_Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121109/17/509dab6a700ab_m.jpg
Since you are the Makeup Artist, the only question would be about the models fingernails, they seem plain rather then the expected long polished elegant nails this look screams for.

Side note pointing the fingers at the camera will make them appear shorter

^^ this. I would even consider retouching in some red nail polish, same color as her lips.

Nov 09 12 06:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


I agree with the others about the fingernails.

Also, the face is looking blue.

Did you have any say in the jewelry/accessories? That metal band around the model's upper arm is too small; it makes her upper arm look almost flabby, the way it pops out of the band.
Nov 09 12 09:26 pm  Link  Quote 
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Deirdre Holmes
Posts: 1,237
San Pedro, California, US


cool photo. I don't think it's the best example of your work...(you do good work...)
Nov 09 12 09:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Makeup Artist
Andrew James Makeup
Posts: 335
Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom


Thanks guys!
ive changed my image to this it was from the same shoot i like it much more to be honest


http://i48.tinypic.com/dqrrbm.jpg
Nov 10 12 03:05 pm  Link  Quote 
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LittleWhiteRabbit Photo
Posts: 134
Columbus, Ohio, US


The first one would look great as a black and white - the color is not adding to the image and is a bit garish - the black and white would enhance the arty quality w/the cool reflection and composition and since the highlights from the beauty dish are very crisp I think the photog could get a good range of tones.

It would also be nice if the photog removed the creases by the armpit issue and made the upper arm more skinny in Photoshop due to the small armband issue someone pointed out.

2nd one is really nice...
Nov 10 12 03:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


Andii James wrote:
Thanks guys!
ive changed my image to this it was from the same shoot i like it much more to be honest


http://i48.tinypic.com/dqrrbm.jpg

Very nice!

Nov 10 12 06:45 pm  Link  Quote 
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