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DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Last week I was able to complete my second nude shoot with a pretty amazing model! Shot just outside of Banff National Park last Sunday, it was about 3 degrees celsius (37ish fahrenheit). It was cold, but she was a trooper!

I would love any feedback or advice on how I can continue to improve smile

1. http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30591006
2. http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30591008 (18+)
3. http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30591003 (18+)
4. http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30591004 (18+)

Thanks for taking a look!
Nov 10 12 04:19 pm  Link  Quote 
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SSR Designs
Posts: 471
Bartlesville, Oklahoma, US


Dan,

The first one is THE ONE.  That is a magical photo and one I would proudly display a very large print of in my office (If I could afford it)

The only constructive feedback I can offer is that the fourth one seems a little flat due to the angle you shot the llama.  I believe just one inch up would have been stunning.

The two middle ones show incredible range for the llama and are great supporting shots for the first one, but that first one says a lot to me.

I see struggle, majesty, beauty, destruction, dismay, all of these things wrapped up into one incredible shot.  Well done sir.
Nov 10 12 04:23 pm  Link  Quote 
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Outer Limit Photography
Posts: 17
Birch Bay, Washington, US


Your use of available light to show off this goddess is excellent and the location is perfect. really enjoyed viewing your stellar work.
Nov 10 12 04:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Nikki Magnusson
Posts: 6,841
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


1...http://a1.ec-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/129/56355047c63340658461981eb7b5a3a6/l.gif
Nov 10 12 04:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
SquareCats
Posts: 46
Long Beach, California, US


the first and third ones are the best.
Nov 10 12 04:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
NumaelDario
Posts: 962
San Francisco, California, US


They are all amazing images!!
Nov 10 12 04:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Julia Francesca
Posts: 2,357
Maumee, Ohio, US


wow, i love them!! great work!
Nov 10 12 04:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
LLOYD WRIGHT
Posts: 664
Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom


hi dan,

the first is my favourite but they all show your usual eye, mood and class!

cheers ears
lloyd
Nov 10 12 04:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jeffrey M Fletcher
Posts: 4,330
Asheville, North Carolina, US


I'm also knocked out by the first image, it's stunning. It's a good set, my compliments.
Nov 10 12 04:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


SSR Designs wrote:
Dan,

The first one is THE ONE.  That is a magical photo and one I would proudly display a very large print of in my office (If I could afford it)

The only constructive feedback I can offer is that the fourth one seems a little flat due to the angle you shot the model.  I believe just one inch up would have been stunning.

The two middle ones show incredible range for the model and are great supporting shots for the first one, but that first one says a lot to me.

I see struggle, majesty, beauty, destruction, dismay, all of these things wrapped up into one incredible shot.  Well done sir.

Thanks! I understand what you are talking about regarding the fourth image... I will keep it in mind next time I shoot something like that smile

Nov 10 12 04:58 pm  Link  Quote 
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DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Thanks for the kind words guys, glad you like them smile
Nov 10 12 05:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
In Its Own Way
Posts: 165
Fort Wayne, Indiana, US


SSR Designs wrote:
Dan,

The first one is THE ONE.  That is a magical photo and one I would proudly display a very large print of in my office (If I could afford it)...

I see struggle, majesty, beauty, destruction, dismay, all of these things wrapped up into one incredible shot.  Well done sir.

+1 Fantastic shot

Nov 10 12 05:07 pm  Link  Quote 
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jkcphotography
Posts: 50
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


In Its Own Way wrote:

+1 Fantastic shot

+2 wow nice work

Nov 10 12 05:21 pm  Link  Quote 
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JAE
Posts: 2,101
West Chester, Pennsylvania, US


First three are really well done.  As mentioned earlier the angle on the 4th one is a bit odd.  Overall very nice series.  Thanks for sharing.
Nov 10 12 05:44 pm  Link  Quote 
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DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


JAE Photography PA wrote:
First three are really well done.  As mentioned earlier the angle on the 4th one is a bit odd.  Overall very nice series.  Thanks for sharing.

Thanks! smile

Nov 10 12 05:59 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,225
Champaign, Illinois, US


I like your foreground aspects and the setting. Not wild about the model being in color and the rest is mono......but that is my taste. Overall I like
Nov 10 12 06:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kelly Kooper
Posts: 1,010
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


The first and third are winners for me Dan.

You have a great eye for art nude.
Nov 10 12 06:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


For me, first (!) and second.

Wonderful use of light.
Nov 10 12 06:42 pm  Link  Quote 
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PTPhotoUT
Posts: 1,959
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


You did the right thing by hiring one of the best llamas.
Nov 10 12 06:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


PTPhotoUT wrote:
You did the right thing by hiring one of the best models.

I definitely feel lucky to have been able to work with her smile

Nov 10 12 07:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lauren Grace
Posts: 1,906
Louisville, Kentucky, US


Love #1

But the real reason I'm commenting is because I've been there! Visited Jasper National Park once and drove all over! LOVED it so much and can't wait to go back! GORGEOUS country!
Nov 10 12 07:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Lauren Grace wrote:
Love #1

But the real reason I'm commenting is because I've been there! Visited Jasper National Park once and drove all over! LOVED it so much and can't wait to go back! GORGEOUS country!

I love it smile

Nov 10 12 07:06 pm  Link  Quote 
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Trulives Photography
Posts: 288
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada


SquareCats wrote:
the first and third ones are the best.

Agreed ... very nice work!

Nov 10 12 07:07 pm  Link  Quote 
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Eros Fine Art Photo
Posts: 2,565
Torrance, California, US


#1 is definitely the best.  Great location, good pose, good mood, good composition, good lighting, etc.  I can't help but think it would be far more compelling as a black & white image though.  It would really isolate the model from the rest of the image and, IMHO, make the mood that much deeper.
Nov 10 12 07:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Burn The Bowery
Posts: 4
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


Really fantastic location. Just agog. If I were developing, I'd saturate a little more ochre or rust into the first and have a serious look at cropping into the feet of shot number 2. I think 2 is good as is but looking for the "picture within the picture" I found that the angles, textures and colors of her feet in closeup were very interesting. Great work!
Nov 10 12 07:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
SYCF
Posts: 272
Los Angeles, California, US


love the first one, the shadow on hip in the 3rd is nice as well.
Nov 10 12 07:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dgold
Posts: 10,269
North Smithfield, Rhode Island, US


Images #1 , 2  and #3 are for me  !
Awesome images and beauty.
Nov 10 12 07:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Chris Maxwell
Posts: 680
Sterling, Virginia, US


Dane is a great model.

Great shots!
Nov 10 12 07:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Thanks!
Nov 10 12 07:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Chris Maxwell wrote:
Dane is a great model.

Great shots!

Yup. She is awesome!

Nov 10 12 07:50 pm  Link  Quote 
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Silverstone Productions
Posts: 182
Eugene, Oregon, US


As you're already aware, number 1 is the best by far. Well done, sir! And a great job to the model as well!

Tell me, since you've done two nude shoots now; how do you like it?
Nov 10 12 08:08 pm  Link  Quote 
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Art Silva
Posts: 9,056
Santa Barbara, California, US


Fantastic work all around and kudos to your model for performing beautifully under such conditions.
Nov 10 12 08:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ICON Photography
Posts: 164
Houston, Texas, US


Not too shabby for ur second...
SAM
Nov 10 12 08:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Silverstone Productions wrote:
As you're already aware, number 1 is the best by far. Well done, sir! And a great job to the model as well!

Tell me, since you've done two nude shoots now; how do you like it?

I enjoy it. I feel like my nude work is my strongest. I am more comfortable shooting nudes than anything with wardrobe. I try to simplify my shots as much as possible; anything that isn’t needed gets tossed out of the frame... including clothes, it seems to work out better that way.

Nov 10 12 08:39 pm  Link  Quote 
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Sherwood Forest Fotos
Posts: 24
San Diego, California, US


Number 1.  Great work.
Nov 10 12 08:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Silverstone Productions
Posts: 182
Eugene, Oregon, US


DAN CRUIKSHANK wrote:
I enjoy it. I feel like my nude work is my strongest. I am more comfortable shooting nudes than anything with wardrobe. I try to simplify my shots as much as possible; anything that isn’t needed gets tossed out of the frame... including clothes, it seems to work out better that way.

I agree with you entirely!

Nov 10 12 09:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DougBPhoto
Posts: 37,788
Portland, Oregon, US


Very nicely done, especially for just your second nude shoot.

About my only nit pick is the lower foot position in image 2, it just strikes me as awkward.
Nov 10 12 09:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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enriquefoto-grafx
Posts: 705
Los Angeles, California, US


When you put a great model, a fantastic location, and an intrepid photographer together....magic happens!..

Second nude shoot, good work!

Continued best....

EG
Nov 10 12 09:59 pm  Link  Quote 
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bmiSTUDIO
Posts: 1,733
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


SSR Designs wrote:
The first one is THE ONE.  That is a magical photo...

I see struggle, majesty, beauty, destruction, dismay, all of these things wrapped up into one incredible shot.  Well done sir.

Amen.

Nov 10 12 10:05 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jay Farrell
Posts: 13,021
Nashville, Tennessee, US


1st one is fabulous.....2nd and 3rd ones are really good too.....4th one doesn't work because of the angle.....but overall, job very well done!
Nov 10 12 10:07 pm  Link  Quote 
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