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Amanda J Foster
Posts: 729
New York, New York, US


I have a new photo to add, and I really don't know which one to delete. Help?
Nov 11 12 09:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
jesse paulk
Posts: 3,712
Phoenix, Arizona, US


how many natural unedited shots do you need....

ditch
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120801/21/501a046918aab_m.jpg

its blown out, blurry, with wronkled sheets, and you have plenty of headshots.
Nov 11 12 10:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,400
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/502072ec328e2_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120801/21/501a04779b9bc_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121111/21/50a08bd25dc23_m.jpg
These would not be missed
Nov 12 12 04:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
SKITA Studios
Posts: 1,563
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Frowny:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/502072ec328e2_m.jpg
Odd angle:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/50207379e469c_m.jpg
Nov 12 12 03:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
M Pandolfo Photography
Posts: 12,113
Tampa, Florida, US


It says you have 15 images in your portfolio but none were showing up for me...even when expanded or viewing all. I have to assume that's an MM thing.
Nov 12 12 03:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dgold
Posts: 10,269
North Smithfield, Rhode Island, US


I suggest to ditch this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/502072ec328e2_m.jpg
Nov 12 12 03:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
M Pandolfo Photography
Posts: 12,113
Tampa, Florida, US


SKITA Studios wrote:
Odd angle:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/50207379e469c_m.jpg

I agree with this one. Not a flattering angle and makes it look like you're slouching and the open mouth expression isn't your best. (OMG, I've turned into my mother...I just said slouching.)

You have a great look btw but a similar scowl in all the images I've seen...and another slouch image with open mouth (the two images montaged).

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121111/21/50a08bd25dc23_m.jpg

Nov 12 12 03:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Amanda J Foster
Posts: 729
New York, New York, US


thanks you guys!
Nov 13 12 05:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Brightonn
Posts: 234
New Orleans, Louisiana, US


http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30605699

I think diptics in general are weak unless its a true editorial.  I also think a few more color might be strong as your color beauty shot really stands out!
Nov 14 12 08:09 am  Link  Quote 
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