Major suckage is still there. Take Fleming's advice and keep whittling. The next to go:
Terribly unflattering hair and awful makeup.
The image is soft and badly composed. Too much dead space above you and your hand is chopped off. Bad snapshot.
Top of your head is in focus. The rest of you is not. And then there are those oversized fake eyelashes. If you want to keep a shot with something close to this angle, you've got the one of you at the edge of the swimming pool. That's a well done shot.