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Noodleputer
Posts: 13
San Diego, California, US


Hello,

This is my second time retouching a photo for practice. I would like to ask for specific help but truthfully after awhile I got so focused on dodging and burning I kind of just lost direction.

So any suggestions on better transitions or whatever would be helpful. Thank you so much in advance.


http://crystal-nguyen.com/images/BA.jpg
Nov 13 12 03:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Oleg Kosach
Posts: 24
Yekaterinburg, Sverdlovsk, Russia


So much sharp on forelock, bad shadows on neck and cheek. Big contast line on forhead after "High Pass". Not bad for second work.
Nov 20 12 01:39 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Noodleputer
Posts: 13
San Diego, California, US


Thank you so much! These are the things I need help seeing when I retouch. thank you again for your feedback, will fix those!
Nov 21 12 12:14 pm  Link  Quote 
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