Hello,

This is my second time retouching a photo for practice. I would like to ask for specific help but truthfully after awhile I got so focused on dodging and burning I kind of just lost direction.

So any suggestions on better transitions or whatever would be helpful. Thank you so much in advance.


http://crystal-nguyen.com/images/BA.jpg

So much sharp on forelock, bad shadows on neck and cheek. Big contast line on forhead after "High Pass". Not bad for second work.

Thank you so much! These are the things I need help seeing when I retouch. thank you again for your feedback, will fix those!