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Photographer
Midwest Expressions
Posts: 566
Wichita, Kansas, US


Been awhile since I've been to the forums, been learning alot the last couple yrs and would like some general feedback on the below image.  Thanks ahead of time.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30627363
Nov 13 12 03:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Ted Sandilands
Posts: 137
Lewiston, New York, US


I like the lighting and the fall off around the skirt. The crop bothers me. IHMO cropping the top of the head works better in a corner not dead center. Maybe also have the model turn a bit more towards the camera.
Nov 13 12 07:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Midwest Expressions
Posts: 566
Wichita, Kansas, US


Ted Sandilands wrote:
I like the lighting and the fall off around the skirt. The crop bothers me. IHMO cropping the top of the head works better in a corner not dead center. Maybe also have the model turn a bit more towards the camera.

Cool, thanks..appreciate the feedback.  Unfortunately, I shot this one cropped like this in the camera, tight.  I actually added a little dead black space to the left of the image to try to get it not to look so tight.

Nov 13 12 08:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DVP Photography
Posts: 2,848
Broomfield, Colorado, US


Overall, it's a good image.  Yeah it would have been better a little more off center.  I'm not liking the light from below under her skirt.  To me it creates a bright spot that pulls my eyes away from her face.
Nov 13 12 10:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Innovative Imagery
Posts: 2,815
Los Angeles, California, US


What is the horizontal line between her legs?  I would clone that out.  Also tone down the up light.  The rest has been covered.
Nov 13 12 10:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Midwest Expressions
Posts: 566
Wichita, Kansas, US


DVP Photography wrote:
Overall, it's a good image.  Yeah it would have been better a little more off center.  I'm not liking the light from below under her skirt.  To me it creates a bright spot that pulls my eyes away from her face.

Thanks for the feedback. smile

Nov 14 12 05:19 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Midwest Expressions
Posts: 566
Wichita, Kansas, US


Innovative Imagery wrote:
What is the horizontal line between her legs?  I would clone that out.  Also tone down the up light.  The rest has been covered.

the line is from the octagon glass top coffee table she is kneeling on.  Yeah, I should hve cloned that out.  Thanks. smile

Nov 14 12 05:20 am  Link  Quote 
Artist/Painter
MainePaintah
Posts: 1,679
Saco, Maine, US


Midwest Expressions wrote:

the line is from the octagon glass top coffee table she is kneeling on.  Yeah, I should hve cloned that out.  Thanks. smile

Aside from the above fix you are going to do, I liked the photo.

I also went to your port. Great job on the rest of the adOria album. 2 thumbs up!

Nov 14 12 05:31 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Midwest Expressions
Posts: 566
Wichita, Kansas, US


MainePaintah wrote:

Aside from the above fix you are going to do, I liked the photo.

I also went to your port. Great job on the rest of the adOria album. 2 thumbs up!

Thanks, appreciate that! smile

Nov 14 12 08:05 am  Link  Quote 
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