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Photographer
FivePhotography
Posts: 207
Des Moines, Iowa, US


Hello everyone. I'm looking for feedback on my newest 5 images. It was a fun shoot, and was my first time using a 70-200 L which was fantastic. Accepting all feedback, from positive to negative. Thanks ahead of time. smile
Nov 13 12 10:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Artifice
Posts: 31,009
Los Angeles, California, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/22/50a33b56bf309_m.jpg
Not crazy about her left arm and phantom fingers

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/22/50a33b45817df_m.jpg
awkward silhouette

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/22/50a33b3222910_m.jpg
Similar complaint to first

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/22/50a33b0f01021_m.jpg
I like it

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/22/50a33aec317ac_m.jpg
Not crazy about phantom fingers on pole and her head is awkwardly tangent to the background building edges, but I basically like it.
Nov 13 12 10:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
FivePhotography
Posts: 207
Des Moines, Iowa, US


Thank you! I appreciate the honesty.
Nov 13 12 11:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 31,689
Lodi, California, US


Those first three images are badly washed-out.
Nov 13 12 11:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
The Effective Image
Posts: 3,918
Lansing, Michigan, US


Ya got the same basic pose in a bunch of images and the images are inconsistent in color and contrast.

Just my opinion.

PS... I'm not a fan of 'drifting' logos. Why not tie it down?
Nov 14 12 03:46 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
B R U N E S C I
Posts: 25,319
Bath, England, United Kingdom


Even though the backgrounds are blurred using a 70-200 like this you still need to think about them and how they affect the composition of the image.

Also, try not to shoot down at your models!




Just my $0.02

Ciao
Stefano

www.stefanobrunesci.com
Nov 14 12 04:07 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Brightonn
Posts: 234
New Orleans, Louisiana, US


I think including one of the images such as the last environmental image or the smiling image (for vareity in genre-emotion) would be a good choice but some of your earlier work strikes me with more impact:

Nov 14 12 07:42 am  Link  Quote 
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