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DLINE Photography
Posts: 23
Memphis, Tennessee, US


All comments welcome..... Please critique!!!!!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/19/50a3123d0ea73_m.jpg
Nov 14 12 03:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
FLORENCE PHOTO STUDIO
Posts: 89
Florence, Oregon, US


Beautiful image, great lines & lighting, Congrats to you both.  smile
   Dave
Nov 14 12 03:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DLINE Photography
Posts: 23
Memphis, Tennessee, US


FLASHBACK PHOTO wrote:
Beautiful image, great lines & lighting, Congrats to you both.  smile
   Dave

Thank you Dave!!

Nov 14 12 03:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


Beautiful work. For avatar duty it's a bit dark in the lower-left corner, but in full scale it's a wonderful image. (BUT it's still a fabulous avatar.)
Nov 14 12 04:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Brightonn
Posts: 234
New Orleans, Louisiana, US


I think the basic geometry of the figure, the pyramid, is really powerful.  Fairly informative of your style and quality of work.
Nov 14 12 04:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DLINE Photography
Posts: 23
Memphis, Tennessee, US


Thank you all for you comments.....
Nov 14 12 04:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
The Effective Image
Posts: 3,933
Lansing, Michigan, US


Nice image, but as an avatar? Nope...

In thumbnail size, it's too dark to tell what's going on in the lower left quadrant.

Remember, some folks are using small monitors and are well past their 20-20 vision days...

Just my opinion
Nov 14 12 08:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
SYCF
Posts: 271
Los Angeles, California, US


I would crop it so it feels symmetrical. The pose is already trying to do that, the off centered to the left crop feels off.
Nov 14 12 10:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,404
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


The pyramid form works well, the space in front of the model feels right, only down side is the light gradient where the bottom is darker.
Nov 15 12 05:10 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DLINE Photography
Posts: 23
Memphis, Tennessee, US


Thanks to all!!!
Nov 15 12 06:29 am  Link  Quote 
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