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Photographer
ammdigital
Posts: 31
Fort Jones, California, US


I just started shooting with local models, I've done weddings, engagements, landscapes, etc., but would like feedback on these images:

#1
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8065/8191567500_0fa52e6f9e_b.jpg
IMG_1154b by AMandM, on Flickr

#2
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8342/8188638975_5724a96bc7_b.jpg
IMG_1141 by AMandM, on Flickr

#3
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8338/8188639309_8c675932b4_b.jpg
IMG_1127 by AMandM, on Flickr
Nov 16 12 04:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Stephanie Yakir
Posts: 81
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


Please ignore this. I've just visited your profile. Keep on keeping on!
Nov 16 12 08:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DVP Photography
Posts: 2,854
Broomfield, Colorado, US


You are doing well.  I see in your photos a good command of both outdoor and indoor lighting (I particularly look for good light in the model's eyes).  Composition is good but tends to be a little static.  For starters get things off the center point.

Keep working at it, you are doing better than most at this point.
Nov 16 12 08:38 pm  Link  Quote 
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