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Photographer
G L Pratt Images
Posts: 13
Tuscola, Illinois, US


I've been using MM for a year now. Now it's time to get some real feedback on my portfolio. Anybody who is willing, I'm looking for some serious critique.
Nov 17 12 06:04 am  Link  Quote 
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Stephanie Yakir
Posts: 81
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


To me, your port seems sort of bland. I'm not sure if your trying to get more into fashion or the art side of things, but either way I think you would benefit from playing around with big colorful looks and more interesting backgrounds.

Your first two nudes are the best you've got so far, as far as set and pose go. However, those tan lines make me cringe. Perhaps there is a way to salvage those pictures with some post editing.

This picture is my least favorite:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120730/05/50167a342910e_m.jpg

The model is making an unflattering expression, the clothing is ill fitting and there is nothing particularly creative about the photo (what I like to call nudey for the sake of nudey).


Lastly, this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120318/05/4f65d5f101101_m.jpg

I am also a model with bad posture. Please please please! If you see something, say something. I can't tell you how many photos were off by that much just because I was too focused on facial expressions to remember my shoulders. You'll be doing both of you favor!
Nov 17 12 09:03 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
G L Pratt Images
Posts: 13
Tuscola, Illinois, US


Stephanie Yakir wrote:
To me, your port seems sort of bland. I'm not sure if your trying to get more into fashion or the art side of things, but either way I think you would benefit from playing around with big colorful looks and more interesting backgrounds.

Your first two nudes are the best you've got so far, as far as set and pose go. However, those tan lines make me cringe. Perhaps there is a way to salvage those pictures with some post editing.

This picture is my least favorite:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120730/05/50167a342910e_m.jpg

The model is making an unflattering expression, the clothing is ill fitting and there is nothing particularly creative about the photo (what I like to call nudey for the sake of nudey).


Lastly, this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120318/05/4f65d5f101101_m.jpg

I am also a model with bad posture. Please please please! If you see something, say something. I can't tell you how many photos were off by that much just because I was too focused on facial expressions to remember my shoulders. You'll be doing both of you favor!

Thanks for taking the time to give me some feedback. After looking at your comments, I can see what your talking about. Your critique was very helpful.

Nov 19 12 06:32 am  Link  Quote 
Model
angel emily
Posts: 1,020
Boston, Massachusetts, US


A lot of your shots are just badly lit, in my opinion.
Nov 19 12 06:42 am  Link  Quote 
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