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Shaquille McFadden
Posts: 20
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121116/15/50a6d2a051f3b_m.jpg

Rate this on scale of 1-10 give best/worst feature
Nov 27 12 10:03 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Autumn Rose Brightly
Posts: 1,097
Crowley, Texas, US


2-1/2

Not crazy about the background, the whiteboard seems off, and she has the 'hair-tie-bracelet'
Nov 27 12 11:17 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Images by MR
Posts: 7,531
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Kind of a interesting idea but not well done... 1.8
Nov 27 12 11:23 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
K I S S P H O T O
Posts: 571
Swansea, Wales, United Kingdom


no sorry.

-1
You can see where you tried painting around the board to make it whiter?
and the lighting is unflattering, her face looks blotchy, overall effort in the photo is 0%
no time spent with light, no time spent on retouching, it doesn't tell a story and just looks amateaur, It's not a photo that anyone else who hasn't held a camera before couldn't take. Photo is blurry/or high pass?
and her hair looks terrible.
Sorry sound blunt but im guessing you want serious critique.
Nov 27 12 11:36 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Shaquille McFadden
Posts: 20
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


K I S S P H O T O wrote:
No, Thankyou I like blunt/ straight forward way to not sugar coat anything
Nov 27 12 11:48 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Vikki A
Posts: 297
London, England, United Kingdom


1/10. For the models make up
Poor post work ( can see the white paint) qulaity is not there, pose is boring...

Looks like its taken with a mobile phone
Nov 27 12 12:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,556
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


Whites of eyes over processed
As pointed out the white board paint job and hair band on wrist

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121116/15/50a6d2a051f3b_m.jpg
Nov 27 12 05:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Photography by Ricky
Posts: 323
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


K I S S P H O T O wrote:
no sorry.

-1
You can see where you tried painting around the board to make it whiter?
and the lighting is unflattering, her face looks blotchy, overall effort in the photo is 0%
no time spent with light, no time spent on retouching, it doesn't tell a story and just looks amateaur, It's not a photo that anyone else who hasn't held a camera before couldn't take. Photo is blurry/or high pass?
and her hair looks terrible.
Sorry sound blunt but im guessing you want serious critique.

+1

Nov 27 12 06:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
PDF IMAGES PHOTOGRAPHY
Posts: 4,603
Jacksonville, Florida, US


1 at least sad

model has a good look smile

composition of shot is just not happening...JMHO
Nov 27 12 06:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Artist/Painter
Hunter GWPB
Posts: 1,207
King of Prussia, Pennsylvania, US


I am going to add one more thing: the watermark.  It changes the depth perception of the white board due to its location and direction.  The white board seems perpendicular to the line of site there and parallel to the wall where you can see the direction of the board.
Nov 27 12 08:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


2. Terrible postprocessing. Not sure what you were trying to do with that whiteboard.

I gave it a 2 because I've seen worse.
Dec 02 12 03:46 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
255 West
Posts: 6,468
New York, New York, US


... and you're holding the marker the way a psycho would wield a knife.
Dec 02 12 03:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MacLeod Designs
Posts: 3,309
Mooresville, North Carolina, US


1, looks very snapshotty

poor lighting (shadow on whiteboard)

you can see the marks where you white out the board,

she has a hair tie on her arm,

skin is extremely blotchy,
Dec 02 12 04:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Fist Full of Ish
Posts: 1,912
Oak Ridge, Tennessee, US


2
Yeah. 
Work on saturation (not too much!)
Clean up skin.
The pic would improve if you cropped the frame off on the left.
Just say "NO" to hair bands on wrists.
Dec 02 12 09:02 pm  Link  Quote 
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