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Avalon Fell
Posts: 75
Rowland Heights, California, US


So lately I've been looking at my portfolio and there's something about it I don't like. What do you think I could change/add/remove to make it better? I'm open to all critique.

Thanks
Nov 27 12 03:58 pm  Link  Quote 
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Lucillian
Posts: 428
Cincinnati, Ohio, US


Your second and third images could be cool if they weren't just covered over by a colored filter. The single color filter makes them seem very plain to me. If you took those two out, I think your port would be much more eye-catching. smile
Nov 28 12 07:37 am  Link  Quote 
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The Face Photography
Posts: 1,549
Madrid, Madrid, Spain


I think that the first image in first and second rows don't do much for your popularity.

I would include some shots where your figure is clearly seen, and a couple more headshots like the one in your avatar. You are extraordinarily attractive.
Nov 28 12 09:22 am  Link  Quote 
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