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Svetlana Eroschenko
Posts: 7
Kirov, Kirov, Russia


Please take a look at my profile and portfolio http://www.modelmayhem.com/2671350
Nov 29 12 05:11 pm  Link  Quote 
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The Effective Image
Posts: 3,918
Lansing, Michigan, US


Let me offer some suggestions on your profile text, mainly smoothing out a few rough spots in the flow of it.


My name is Svetlana. I'm a photographer and freelance retoucher based in Kirov, Russia. I have been a retoucher for 8 years. I am experienced in retouching hair, and very experienced in retouching skin, eyes, teeth and other parts of an image.

I like to make pictures better and better to obtain high-end results. I work fast and clearly. I have worked with various photographers for a long time.

I hope to find new photographers to work for and I look forward to assisting them in creating gorgeous results!



Good Luck!
Nov 29 12 05:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Svetlana Eroschenko
Posts: 7
Kirov, Kirov, Russia


Thank you!
Nov 30 12 12:14 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Sandra Vixen
Posts: 642
Los Angeles, California, US


You "clean up" very nicely while preserving the basic (surface) contours. smile

I would make the feet more pointed (is that a dancer?) anyone wearing a leotard needs to pointe their feet:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120603/06/4fcb6516f0f73_m.jpg


Lower the shoulders on this one, so the neck looks longer:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120603/06/4fcb64ed46ca4_m.jpg

What about editing the background to put a highlight on the flower instead of the head? They seem to be fighting focus there:
'http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120603/06/4fcb634faae04_m.jpg

(edit)
I messaged you privately, let me know if you are from the Myrinsky.
Nov 30 12 12:36 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Svetlana Eroschenko
Posts: 7
Kirov, Kirov, Russia


Sandra Vixen wrote:
You "clean up" very nicely while preserving the basic (surface) contours. smile

I would make the feet more pointed (is that a dancer?) anyone wearing a leotard needs to pointe their feet:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120603/06/4fcb6516f0f73_m.jpg


Lower the shoulders on this one, so the neck looks longer:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120603/06/4fcb64ed46ca4_m.jpg

What about editing the background to put a highlight on the flower instead of the head? They seem to be fighting focus there:
'http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120603/06/4fcb634faae04_m.jpg

(edit)
I messaged you privately, let me know if you are from the Myrinsky.

Thank you, good advice!

Nov 30 12 02:34 am  Link  Quote 
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