LOVE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30588143 how natural and pretty your expression is
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30592795 that you have a less edited picture so i can see more of how you really look
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30770624 how your pose here looks real, and the expression is interesting and dynamic
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30587428 that you are doing something with your hands/arms
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30592480 that your eyes connect with the camera
HATE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30609137 how you almost look like you are sneering, and the edit on your skin is very orange/shiny/plastic
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30588143 how stiff your pose is
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30567775 how awkward your arms look (just dangling)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30659306 this odd half almost smile
-that you have so many similar images from one session- shoot more!

HEATHER 18 wrote:
i will list 10 things i like and 10 things i don't - please, only way to improve

LOVE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28291367 your expression and connection to the camera
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27363286 cute and natural posing
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30055329 the natural movement in this pose
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27363289 lovely connection in the eyes
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30054740 relaxation in front of the camera
HATE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28375263 how awkward your arms look
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21982494 empty eyes/expressions
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23929517 the awkward arm holding the skirt
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28291365 how the leg to the knee feels forced
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28291455 that this picture doesn't have any draw/excitement to it

HATE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25613234 the obvious color on the hat when the rest is so muted
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23816996 how smoothed/plastic the skin feels
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28780205 the distracting highlight on her hair/upper forehead
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28711579 how shiny everything feels
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25613232 the spot on the background in the upper left
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20725651 how i am bothered by the wall texture
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29084819 the feel of the edit
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27584952 how this tries to be vintage but the edit does not succeed
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29125701 the orange/gray skin tone
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30054125 how much brighter her chest is than her face (i don't think faces always have to be lit, it just doesn't work here)

Thanks so much for your time and your critiques. I'm very fascinating by the different reactions people has with this shot... actually I think that make it strong.

Emmiq wrote:
aww, I was skipped

May I have half and half?

you were not skipped, you are partway down page 2 and i just started that page. i will get to you!

Egle Damulyte wrote:
a little bit of both maybe ?

LOVE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27644323 the way your eyes draw me in to the picture, and your expression
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25790229 expression!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29447445 the subtle intensity of the image
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25790284 how naturally beautiful you are on camera
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25790308 how relaxed, yet good, you look here
HATE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30486408 that your poses feel slightly contrived
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30486411 the stiffness of the pose
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25790171 that i am just not really a fan of this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30754866 that you look short here for some reason
-how your full body shots don't measure up to your effortless headshots

Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:

Me please Either/or

LOVE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30328295 your freckles!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29848237 how you look at ease and connect with the camera at the same time
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30553754 the relaxed pose that shows off your shape
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30889849 the expression
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30889369 how you elongated your body and your face looks relaxed and connected
HATE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30328505 the background and slightly deer-in-the-headlights look
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30839426 that this looks like a just-sitting-there picture and not a model
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30839211 how your pose scrunches up your body
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30173963 that it looks like you are sucking in your cheeks
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30173963 the glasses cutting in to your eye shape and the angle on your face

LOVE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25220887 the frame of the photo, and the contrast
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30745520 the use of light
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22574312 the soft/warm tones
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23042055 how the image pops, and the framing
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23573282 how ethereal this feels
HATE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25220813 that this feels unfocused and the skin is mottled?
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23042009 how her face almost glows
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23042155 how intense/overdone the editing effect is
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28762104 the greenish tones and how the skin disappears in to the wall
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23042115 how i want to really like this a lot but her eyes look way too green, and the skin does a little too

Thank you for taking the time Kess I appreciate it all.

And just let me say, it's a damn shame you've retired.... A damn shame!

LOVE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30826792 water pictures
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29911361 the edit, the feel, very cool
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29911343 white on white
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29926181 pictures in motion, and the muted feel
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29911625 backlit hair with light in the eyes!
HATE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29911402 the drizzly white effect on an otherwise really cool picture
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29911242 how she looks like a fake person
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30911059 the edit- and that this image doesn't seem to measure up to other work
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29911485 the odd/harsh lines in the cheek shadows
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29911499 again something weird in the cheek shadow- light? hair?
...
and milk.

Thank you for taking the time and feedback, Kess! You really are quite fantastic!

LOVE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29050583 the lighting, tone, mood, and frame
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28257960 how this image pops off the screen
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29943388 the mix of slightly blurred motion and clear still that parallels the mix of bright light and shadow
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28254125 how you still have light in her eyes
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30693980 how the softness works here
HATE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29943357 the blurry hair on her face- there seem to be two lines of light above her lip too, which is odd/distracting
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30323021 that the picture somehow looks a little blue and it glows in odd places
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29779966 how flat the image is and the gray in her skin tone
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27939105 that the effect is very overdone- it looks like it was created, not shot
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30458849 how much better i would like this if it were cropped in more towards her upper body/face (the interesting part, right now the legs sticking out of the sides just look odd)

James Ogilvie wrote:
I'd like ten things you don't like, please.  Thanks! 

HATE:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23779686 how hard the shadows are, because if it is distracting and the picture otherwise looks really cool
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30518148 how shiny and plastic the skin looks
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30767814 how sharp/artificial this feels
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13057338 how deep the shadow is in the corner of her eye
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28796982 that something really bugs me about this image but i can't put it in to words
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/3849238 how black the black is- it makes me think she is photoshopped on, but i am not sure if she is
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28796964 the skin feels a little plastic here
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27247817 that you chose a picture where your model looks very surprised
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27743377 that the wall texture bugs me
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15883961 that i feel like her legs look short- probably the styling, or maybe could have shot from a lower angle

M A R A S O N wrote:
Lets give it a try

If you're still up for it.. I'd like to know both.