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https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/1 … l#/A151704 thats the link to my new photos, let me know what you think and i will critique your avatar Dec 02 12 09:29 am Link anyone? Dec 02 12 04:00 pm Link I really like your use of lighting! well done Dec 02 12 09:25 pm Link Maybe if I knew what they were intended for.... They're kind of clinical in appearance as far as the posing and action. The first question that came to mind was, "Sports medicine?" Lighting is great, but the action seems a little stiff to me. Dec 04 12 12:51 pm Link  Great Lighting, great job overall. Dec 04 12 09:09 pm Link EAS PHOTOGRAPHY wrote: i really like your profile photo as a large size, as an avatar, the shadow is a bit overcoming Dec 05 12 04:14 pm Link OmnyRa wrote: i like the nice clean lighting on your model in your avatar, but the overwhelming hot spot on the chair beside her is very distracting Dec 05 12 04:15 pm Link Nightlites Photography wrote: thanks Dec 05 12 04:16 pm Link It looks like you've got the strobist style down pretty good, but it just looks like a lighting exercise. They need something more - Maybe more expression, maybe more background, maybe some grunge effects in Photoshop. Dec 08 12 03:08 am Link Nightlites Photography wrote: Agree with this - the lighting and overall look is very clean and polished. Dec 08 12 09:50 pm Link I like the idea of this one, but something about the positioning makes it look like she has wheels for legs. I'm not sure if it's because it's right at the knees, or if it would have felt that way even if it was lower on her leg. I do really like the powder in the air and the tone of the picture.  Dec 10 12 04:56 pm Link |
