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Alexander Image
Posts: 1,459
East Brunswick, New Jersey, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/18/50bc0e719f1be_m.jpg

How do you think? Welcome any comments and suggestions. Thanks!
Dec 02 12 06:38 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


It isn't a bad shot, and I think it is a good addition to your port at this moment. However IMO I don't believe you should use it as an avatar. I don't think it is "catchy" enough
Dec 02 12 10:17 pm  Link  Quote 
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Alexander Image
Posts: 1,459
East Brunswick, New Jersey, US


Peach Jones wrote:
It isn't a bad shot, and I think it is a good addition to your port at this moment. However IMO I don't believe you should use it as an avatar. I don't think it is "catchy" enough

Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate it!

Dec 03 12 05:45 am  Link  Quote 
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Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,439
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/18/50bc0e719f1be_m.jpg
50 / 50
Like the lighting, interesting location

Do dot like the models right hand pose it is kind of in your face, which is distracting viewers eyes off the models face
Cropping of models left hand, when you show the elbow would be nice to see the hand
Those two silver building girders are also over powering

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110803/18/4e39f1356674e_m.jpg
Think this would be a strong avatar
Dec 03 12 05:53 am  Link  Quote 
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KMP
Posts: 4,667
Houston, Texas, US


Alexander Image wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/18/50bc0e719f1be_m.jpg

How do you think? Welcome any comments and suggestions. Thanks!

As they say.. ask 20 people their opinion and you'll get 20 different opinions.

Personally, I don't mind the hand position, or the lighting. It looks like he's on  a bridge at night. Night time light comes from all sorts of odd sources..  Maybe adding some warm background lighting would have pushed the blues to be stronger..but that's more an observation than a critique.

My only thing is,  I don't get the title and how it relates to the image.

JMHO

Dec 03 12 06:04 am  Link  Quote 
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Alexander Image
Posts: 1,459
East Brunswick, New Jersey, US


Lee_Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/18/50bc0e719f1be_m.jpg
50 / 50
Like the lighting, interesting location

Do dot like the models right hand pose it is kind of in your face, which is distracting viewers eyes off the models face
Cropping of models left hand, when you show the elbow would be nice to see the hand
Those two silver building girders are also over powering

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110803/18/4e39f1356674e_m.jpg
Think this would be a strong avatar

Thank you for your comments! I really like your criticism!

Dec 03 12 06:48 am  Link  Quote 
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John Horwitz
Posts: 2,585
Raleigh, North Carolina, US


does he have a headache?
Dec 03 12 06:54 am  Link  Quote 
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Alexander Image
Posts: 1,459
East Brunswick, New Jersey, US


KevinMcGowanPhotography wrote:

As they say.. ask 20 people their opinion and you'll get 20 different opinions.

Personally, I don't mind the hand position, or the lighting. It looks like he's on  a bridge at night. Night time light comes from all sorts of odd sources..  Maybe adding some warm background lighting would have pushed the blues to be stronger..but that's more an observation than a critique.

My only thing is,  I don't get the title and how it relates to the image.

JMHO

Thank you for your comments! The model expression, pose and background structures (supports) made me think of "Responsibility"

Dec 03 12 06:54 am  Link  Quote 
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Alexander Image
Posts: 1,459
East Brunswick, New Jersey, US


John Horwitz wrote:
does he have a headache?

Thank you for your "imagination" smile

Dec 03 12 06:56 am  Link  Quote 
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