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MesmerEyes Photography
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Tyler, Texas, US


Dec 02 12 10:48 pm  Link  Quote 
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Don Garrett
Posts: 4,297
Escondido, California, US


In this case, I would say that a tighter crop would make the image more powerful, and the composition "better". Some off the top, and some off BOTH sides, until the model becomes less "lost" in the background. About 25-30% off, total, in my opinion.
-Don
Dec 02 12 10:57 pm  Link  Quote 
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MesmerEyes Photography
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Tyler, Texas, US


Thank you Don.
Dec 02 12 11:13 pm  Link  Quote 
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DVP Photography
Posts: 2,854
Broomfield, Colorado, US


The stark white logo against the black background draws the viewers eye away from the subject.  Not good.  My preference would be to soften it and make it translucent.

I agree sort of with the above on cropping.  Since the models's face and eyes are in shadow, the photo would be strongest if cropped all the way to a bodyscape where the lighting is good.  Or, the model's face and eyes should also have good light in keeping with the light on her body.
Dec 03 12 12:34 am  Link  Quote 
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