Way too wordy, and the pictures aren't the least bit helpful (washed out, and too small to see any real detail)- until you have more impressive work to show, I would suggest removing the images from your profile page. As is, the images you currently have on your profile would not make me want to look at the rest of your port.
Potential clients aren't going to care about your resume, they care about your ability to actually apply makeup, which should be displayed in your port. If your pictures suck, it doesn't matter where you went to school, or how much work experience you have, people aren't going to hire you. I would recommend removing the entire resume portion from your profile, and let your images speak for themselves. Maybe include one sentence that says where you went to school + your years of experience, and just leave it at that.
Try to make the rest of your profile clear and concise, and don't include more info than necessary. People have a hard time reading more than a couple of sentences these days, so the shorter your profile, the better chance people will actually read it.
Best of luck to you!