The eyes are badly overprocessed. The crud on her eyebrows may be an artistic choice, but IMO it wrecks the image even more than the eyes.
Again, overprocessed eyes. Face is blown out and the image is just too darned out of focus.
I like this for the energy and personality. It's a basic snapshot, but a pretty decent snapshot. Personality makes this.
The lips and the whites of the eyes are overprocessed, but otherwise a really interesting image.