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Kimberly Hicks
Posts: 7
Fayetteville, Arkansas, US

I am new to this and would love to hear some feedback. Please keep your comments respectful. Thanks!
Dec 03 12 09:07 pm  Link  Quote 
jesse paulk
Posts: 3,712
Phoenix, Arizona, US

skin looks muddy, the blow out is way to much in the headshot. 3 years? why is half your port from the same shoot?
Dec 03 12 11:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US

The eyes are badly overprocessed. The crud on her eyebrows may be an artistic choice, but IMO it wrecks the image even more than the eyes.

Again, overprocessed eyes. Face is blown out and the image is just too darned out of focus.

I like this for the energy and personality. It's a basic snapshot, but a pretty decent snapshot. Personality makes this.

The lips and the whites of the eyes are overprocessed, but otherwise a really interesting image.
Dec 04 12 05:36 am  Link  Quote 
Aaron Lewis Photography
Posts: 5,083
Catskill, New York, US

This is definitely your best shot IMO

The rest of them look like they've been over processed, blown out or have other exposure or tonal problems. Maybe portrait professional? Since that software usually has a similar effect on the eyes as to what we see here.

You get extra credit for the composition on this
not exposure or post work, just composition.
Dec 04 12 06:08 am  Link  Quote 
Kimberly Hicks
Posts: 7
Fayetteville, Arkansas, US

The rest of my portfolio is typical portraits like engagement shoots, weddings, seniors etc. I have only done a few shoots with models.
Dec 06 12 05:01 pm  Link  Quote 
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