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Photographer
Kimberly Hicks
Posts: 7
Fayetteville, Arkansas, US


I am new to this and would love to hear some feedback. Please keep your comments respectful. Thanks!
Dec 03 12 09:07 pm  Link  Quote 
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jesse paulk
Posts: 3,712
Phoenix, Arizona, US


skin looks muddy, the blow out is way to much in the headshot. 3 years? why is half your port from the same shoot?
Dec 03 12 11:49 pm  Link  Quote 
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Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121201/11/50ba5dacc55a5_m.jpg
The eyes are badly overprocessed. The crud on her eyebrows may be an artistic choice, but IMO it wrecks the image even more than the eyes.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121125/19/50b2e5473cb78_m.jpg
Again, overprocessed eyes. Face is blown out and the image is just too darned out of focus.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121125/19/50b2e5036f0af_m.jpg
I like this for the energy and personality. It's a basic snapshot, but a pretty decent snapshot. Personality makes this.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121125/19/50b2e55eb1481_m.jpg
The lips and the whites of the eyes are overprocessed, but otherwise a really interesting image.
Dec 04 12 05:36 am  Link  Quote 
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Aaron Lewis Photography
Posts: 5,078
Catskill, New York, US


This is definitely your best shot IMO
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30762954

The rest of them look like they've been over processed, blown out or have other exposure or tonal problems. Maybe portrait professional? Since that software usually has a similar effect on the eyes as to what we see here.

You get extra credit for the composition on this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30762979
not exposure or post work, just composition.
Dec 04 12 06:08 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Kimberly Hicks
Posts: 7
Fayetteville, Arkansas, US


The rest of my portfolio is typical portraits like engagement shoots, weddings, seniors etc. I have only done a few shoots with models.
Dec 06 12 05:01 pm  Link  Quote 
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