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intense_puppy
Posts: 846
Brighton, England, United Kingdom

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Good, bad, stupid? What would you have done differently if you shot these?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30903399

Thanks!

Dec 08 12 11:21 am Link Quote

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Lee_Photography
Posts: 7,717
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121208/08/50c36cbc33d56_m.jpg

One photo per slot works the best

Top photo:
Almost half the image is of a wall
Best to have more space in front of the model then behind
Show long fingers when possible

Bottom Photo:
Quite a noisy image
Cropping below the knee is not the preferred location
Think long fingers
Nice expression

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Dec 08 12 12:09 pm Link Quote

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intense_puppy
Posts: 846
Brighton, England, United Kingdom

Lee_Photography wrote:
One photo per slot works the best

Top photo:
Almost half the image is of a wall
Best to have more space in front of the llama then behind
Show long fingers when possible

Bottom Photo:
Quite a noisy image
Cropping below the knee is not the preferred location
Think long fingers
Nice expression

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Thanks for the input - it's appreciated!

BTW - that's not noise - that's film grain smile

Dec 08 12 12:10 pm Link Quote

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Lee_Photography
Posts: 7,717
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

intense puppy wrote:

Thanks for the input - it's appreciated!

BTW - that's not noise - that's film grain smile

What’s film? Haven’t used that for 5 or 6 years now

Dec 08 12 07:28 pm Link Quote

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