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intense_puppy
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Lee_Photography
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One photo per slot works the best

Top photo:
Almost half the image is of a wall
Best to have more space in front of the model then behind
Show long fingers when possible

Bottom Photo:
Quite a noisy image
Cropping below the knee is not the preferred location
Think long fingers
Nice expression

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Dec 08 12 12:09 pm  Link  Quote 
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intense_puppy
Posts: 862
Brighton, England, United Kingdom


Lee_Photography wrote:
One photo per slot works the best

Top photo:
Almost half the image is of a wall
Best to have more space in front of the llama then behind
Show long fingers when possible

Bottom Photo:
Quite a noisy image
Cropping below the knee is not the preferred location
Think long fingers
Nice expression

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Thanks for the input - it's appreciated!

BTW - that's not noise - that's film grain smile

Dec 08 12 12:10 pm  Link  Quote 
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Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,422
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


intense puppy wrote:

Thanks for the input - it's appreciated!

BTW - that's not noise - that's film grain smile

What’s film? Haven’t used that for 5 or 6 years now

Dec 08 12 07:28 pm  Link  Quote 
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