Samantha Emme wrote:
I dont think any of them work as well as the ones you had before

+1 - I am not loving any of them.  I really think you have potential, but these concepts just aren't working for you.  But keep trying - you will get there.

Samantha Emme wrote:
I dont think any of them work as well as the ones you had before

so why don't they work and what would?

The Effective Image wrote:
Let me ask a question about one of your images.

Specifically this one.



Did the photographer or you rotate it?

I don't think it works 'rotated'... there are wrinkles in the sheets... kind of hard to imagine a wall covered with wrinkled sheets.

Just my opinion.

it wasnt rotated, that was the way it was shot, not meant to be a wall.

This one you look very tired, and I am not digging the placement of the make up on you, pretty as it is.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30913276

This one same thing, except you look too distracted as well:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30913299

This one should be flipped the right way, but even so its boring compared to your other black and whites:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 9#30913280

You work better in subtle things, with soft photography and things that are simple enough to showcase you. The make up in the first two shots is a distractor, and not an enhancer of you.