your whole port is very amateurish at the very best. It shows that as of now you have very little artistic sense- spend some time in museums looking at top fashion magazine and TAKE CLASSES if you want to improve.
Your lighting and coloring is way off. It also gives the image a softer look...in other words "not sharp"
Practice and have fun. work on your rule of thirds and others things that can add interest and "drama" to your shots. On MM you will always have some haters. Never mind about them. Keep doing what you love and I think in no time you will get some results you can be happy with