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Model
hamishearl
Posts: 3
Adelaide, South Australia, Australia
Your review of one or more of my photos would be appreciated.
Dec 09 12 06:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1,707
Nashville, Tennessee, US
You're very new. You need to work with photographers. Your avatar is decent for now, but once you get better quality, delete everything in there.

Delete these:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#30853033
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30852998

As they do not show you anyway.
Dec 09 12 06:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Deirdre Holmes
Posts: 1,237
San Pedro, California, US

hamishearl wrote:
Your review of one or more of my photos would be appreciated.

Your photos look new. As a whole, a nice snapshot portfolio. It leaves me with the feeling that you are a beginner and a nice person.

Dec 09 12 06:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 7,645
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US
Great photos make a great portfolio

Add a great head shot
Add a full length dressed in a suit or tux

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Dec 10 12 05:24 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mark
Posts: 2,314
New York, New York, US
to cut thru the crap- your pictures reveal no qualities/reasons to pursue modeling on any level other than as an unpaid hobby.
Dec 10 12 07:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 28,330
Lodi, California, US

Mark wrote:
to cut thru the crap- your pictures reveal no qualities/reasons to pursue modeling on any level other than as an unpaid hobby.

Since he is -- by his own admission -- just starting out, there's little harm in getting in more shoots with the best photographers willing to work with him.

Dec 11 12 03:36 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Glenn Liam Kelly
Posts: 39
Sarina, Queensland, Australia
The second one captioned side is a nice pose by you but a pretty poor photo. The background is messy, lighting flat, skin tone washed out and lacking in detail. Now imaging that pose captured by a professional with those problems fixed. That would be an image you could use to sell yourself to an agency or prospective client.
Dec 11 12 05:30 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Supermodel Photographer
Posts: 3,305
Oyster Bay, New York, US

hamishearl wrote:
Insert Criticism here   C+

Dec 11 12 05:41 am  Link  Quote 
Model
hamishearl
Posts: 3
Adelaide, South Australia, Australia
Thank you all for the feedback, much appreciated.
Dec 14 12 03:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,647
Portland, Oregon, US
Delete these because they do not show you at all. They are poorly shot, poorly lit, blurry.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30853033
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30852998

Never ever use cell phone pics in your portfolio!! If you must have one to update your look then fine but this is just a weird shot.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30776339
Dec 16 12 12:41 am  Link  Quote 
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