Hey there, I'm looking for critique of my portfolio, So I suppose give me the best and worst of my port and what I could do to improve, I appreciate honest responses.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/677602/viewall

Thanks
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Best of what your port has to offer
Nice “S” curve
Models right arm too straight,
Busy background


Least favorite
If your face is obscured by glare, how can you be selected for work?
Simple shirts with out logos and pictures work best as least distracting
Looking up the models nose may not be the most flattering angle

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Thank you