Guss W wrote:
Very, very nice.
Just a couple of thoughts -
The girl in the chair with cigarette is sufficiently different in style and mood from the rest that perhaps it should not be part of the group.
A picture should have a focal point of interest within the image that the eye is drawn to. In a portrait, this would usually be the face. I'm not seeing that in the photo of the back-bending girl, and my eye tends to wander around the image. While the picture shows off her unique talents, I'm not sure it's showing off yours.
You're so right ! Thank you for your time!