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Dear friends, I'd be curious to hear any constructive critiques about my artworks, please feel free to drop a line.  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/1746280/viewall Dec 20 12 10:13 pm Link My goal in getting critiques? I just want to use MM as a social network, get people to comment and critiques my pictures and I shall do the same to others! Dec 20 12 10:16 pm Link Very, very nice. Just a couple of thoughts - The girl in the chair with cigarette is sufficiently different in style and mood from the rest that perhaps it should not be part of the group. A picture should have a focal point of interest within the image that the eye is drawn to. In a portrait, this would usually be the face. I'm not seeing that in the photo of the back-bending girl, and my eye tends to wander around the image. While the picture shows off her unique talents, I'm not sure it's showing off yours. Dec 21 12 04:34 pm Link Guss W wrote: You're so right ! Thank you for your time! Dec 21 12 10:20 pm Link |
