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dhp
Posts: 111
San Francisco, California, US


Hm. How bout these two:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130110/20/50ef90f0da377_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130110/20/50ef919c6b02f_m.jpg
Jan 10 13 08:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Daniel Pierce wrote:
All you:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130109/15/50edf962c5b3b_m.jpg

Honestly,you have much better in your port!
I'm not a fan.. Unflattering photo and your eyes are not in focus the most important thing.. I can see your nose is in focus to its the photographers error when he was focusing .

Jan 11 13 05:56 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


A Virtual Inferno wrote:
What do you think?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121229/23/50dfe96a4641e_m.jpg

This photo is not bad!
I do have a few issues though; her mid section is in the shadows so it looks weird and the lamp shade in the background is distracting and last, I am not a huge fan of her facial expression.

Jan 11 13 06:05 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Pantelis Palios
Posts: 249
Birmingham, England, United Kingdom


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121031/04/50910716e7de9_m.jpg
Jan 11 13 07:20 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Daniel Pierce
Posts: 629
Burbank, California, US


Rachel Reilly wrote:

Honestly,you have much better in your port!
I'm not a fan.. Unflattering photo and your eyes are not in focus the most important thing.. I can see your nose is in focus to its the photographers error when he was focusing .

Good call.

Thanks for the compliment (at least taken as one) as well.

Jan 11 13 09:35 am  Link  Quote 
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the lonely photographer
Posts: 1,875
Beverly Hills, California, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121211/16/50c7cb0b91d58_m.jpg   I've gotten some comments regarding this  image.
Jan 11 13 09:57 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Gina Dee
Posts: 304
BRONX, New York, US


Jan 11 13 10:19 am  Link  Quote 
Model
NicoleNudes
Posts: 3,796
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Jan 11 13 10:38 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Autumn Rose Brightly
Posts: 1,097
Crowley, Texas, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121004/22/506e6d7d8ea8a_m.jpg

Thanks bunches big_smile
Jan 11 13 10:40 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Daniel Pierce wrote:

Good call.

Thanks for the compliment (at least taken as one) as well.

Definitely a compliment :-)

Jan 11 13 10:40 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Caveman Creations wrote:
I'll have a go.....

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120627/20/4febd46f09784_m.jpg

Things I like: model is gorgeous, the colors are pretty
Things that don't work: the light under her chin, her hair looks very unkept, her Facial expression is a little blah( no life in her eyes) you could crop some more off the top and the tattoo on her shoulder blade ( not so much the one on her spine though) is distracting

Best of luck to you!

Jan 11 13 10:46 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


dhp wrote:
Hm. How bout these two:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130110/20/50ef90f0da377_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130110/20/50ef919c6b02f_m.jpg

Photo one : I can't say anything negative about it becaus it looks pretty good technically.
This image does not excite me though.. Take it that for what it is....:-/

Photo 2: this one is much better! The hard wood floor and the reflections really works. Her face looks amazing i just wish there was more separation between her face and her arm/wall because her face is blending in, Also it's blown out in the right corner maybe if you evened that out.

Jan 11 13 10:56 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Pantelis Palios wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121031/04/50910716e7de9_m.jpg

Not a fan of this portrait.
The shadows are distracting, there's no life on model's eyes, styling/hair/ makeup is boring , models facial expression is dead

Jan 11 13 03:00 pm  Link  Quote 
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Stuart Henderson
Posts: 16
Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom


Jan 12 13 10:33 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Stuart Henderson
Posts: 16
Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130105/16/50e8c62f8d612.jpg
Jan 12 13 10:45 am  Link  Quote 
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Lazy Eye Photography
Posts: 9
Los Altos, California, US


Would definitely appreciate your feedback - I looked at some of the comments you made on other work, and it's clear you have a good eye.  wink

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130105/22/50e916fcb9a9b.jpg
Jan 12 13 10:54 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dazaria
Posts: 21
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


Rachel Reilly wrote:

You definitely have the look/ stats but that is not enough.
I suggest hiring a really great photographer to work with and practicing in the mirror/ look at fashion magazines. But modeling is acting. You must not be afraid to look weird or stupid! If the photographer wants you to be "sad" you literally need t dig down deep and think about something that makes you sad in order for its to portray as believable in the photo. If the photographer wants you to look angry you could actually growl or yell , you know?

I find that some people tend to stop being themselves when the camera comes out. Their expressions becomes dull or forced, sometimes uncomfortable. Just relax, be you.

Jan 12 13 01:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dazaria
Posts: 21
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130108/15/50ecae479e0ce_m.jpg
Jan 12 13 02:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
MissLaurelle
Posts: 3,532
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130112/10/50f1a62b21909_m.jpg
Jan 12 13 02:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MidnightSun Designs
Posts: 337
WINSTON SALEM, North Carolina, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130109/12/50edd381d558a_m.jpg

here u go
Jan 12 13 04:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


the lonely photographer wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121211/16/50c7cb0b91d58_m.jpg   I've gotten some comments regarding this  image.

This is a great photo!
I like her styling/hair/make up and her blank expression works!
I am not a fan of the lack of retouching (she needs it on her skin) and the shadows.. There are too many and i understand. It was probably intentional but I'm not feeling it!

Jan 13 13 02:08 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Gina Redd wrote:
18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29790457
Your thoughts?

I love this photo!
Your somewhat blank expression works for this (but not all the time)
I love how you're topless because it just adds more beauty and a sense of freedom.
There are cropping  issues but that's not your fault!

Jan 13 13 02:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joe Harary
Posts: 5
Holliston, Massachusetts, US


Feedback Please. Most kind of you.
What do you think of others in my portfolio?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130101/16/50e37eec6afd5_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130101/16/50e37deecea61_m.jpg
Jan 13 13 07:45 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


dazaria wrote:

I find that some people tend to stop being themselves when the camera comes out. Their expressions becomes dull or forced, sometimes uncomfortable. Just relax, be you.

Definitely!
Especially working w amateur and hobby models ! Oy vey

Jan 13 13 09:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Aleysha
Posts: 1
Launceston, Tasmania, Australia


Would love some critique for this photo, my second shoot. smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130112/18/50f21743d4897_m.jpg
Jan 13 13 11:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Image 1: over all this is visually pleasing, great pose and body.
The aspects that didn't work for me are the random white bra (really don't get it) the lighting on your face, and your facial expression.

Image 2: I don't get this at all and I'm not a fan..

Jan 14 13 05:10 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121004/22/506e6d7d8ea8a_m.jpg

Thanks bunches big_smile

Image one: this doesn't work for me. Very unoriginal .
Practice facial expression and posing.
I do not like your blank expression, your legs are cut off, and your armpit fat is showing (not saying you're fat! Just you know when you sit certain ways the far under your arm out bulges? Just be aware of stuff like that) also your hand is missing on the arm you're leaning on.

Image 2: this just looks like a mess to me! Your expression is very unflattering,  your hair is in your face and the styling is off!

Jan 14 13 05:17 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Stuart Henderson wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130105/16/50e8c62f8d612.jpg

This is really good! I do like the styling / makeup for the most part.
I get the background is supposed to be blown out but it might be a tiny bit to much.
Also for some reason I wish her hair was longer and maybe different pose.
Do you have anymore of these?

Jan 14 13 05:37 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Nicole Packs
Posts: 257
New York, New York, US


You don't have to be gentle.
This is a non-edit.
Thank you in advance c:

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d75/S … 383c6b.jpg

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d75/SoaringReality/IMG_0197_zps54383c6b.jpg
Jan 14 13 05:52 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Stuart Henderson
Posts: 16
Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom


Rachel Reilly wrote:

This is really good! I do like the styling / makeup for the most part.
I get the background is supposed to be blown out but it might be a tiny bit to much.
Also for some reason I wish her hair was longer and maybe different pose.
Do you have anymore of these?

Thank you very much, I appreciate your compliments and critiques..I do have some more of these with a couple different poses and not "as" blown out.

Jan 14 13 09:42 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
JGProductions
Posts: 34
Palatine, Illinois, US


I would like to know if this is too blown out and if the skin tone is ok.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/13 … 12e44a.jpg
Jan 14 13 10:46 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Stuart Henderson wrote:

Thank you very much, I appreciate your compliments and critiques..I do have some more of these with a couple different poses and not "as" blown out.

Oh post one id love to see!

Jan 14 13 10:49 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Lazy Eye Photography wrote:
Would definitely appreciate your feedback - I looked at some of the comments you made on other work, and it's clear you have a good eye.  wink

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130105/22/50e916fcb9a9b.jpg

Thank you!

This photo is beautiful! I can't really say anything negative.
I will suggest doing some skin retouching just for polish,
be aware of cutting off limbs like her knee in the photo doesn't look good at all, try this in a classic black and white, and last I think the only thing that could make this more beautiful was if the models face wasn't straight on.

Jan 14 13 11:15 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


dazaria wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130108/15/50ecae479e0ce_m.jpg

I don't like this. It's a straight up snapshot! With terrible editing.

Jan 14 13 11:18 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


MissLaurelle wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130112/10/50f1a62b21909_m.jpg

Obviously you're beautiful and you have a great figure butttt... This photo is not interesting at all! Hate the background/hair style.. But also your hair is blending in background, the photographer should have given you a hair light.
The make up looks fantastic, the lingerie is just boring though.

Jan 14 13 11:25 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jojo West
Posts: 972
Silver Spring, Maryland, US


Jan 14 13 12:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


JGProductions wrote:
I would like to know if this is too blown out and if the skin tone is ok.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/13 … 12e44a.jpg

It is very blown out. A bit too much but it's not bad.. Nothing negative to say except it's out  of focus..  her face is!

Jan 14 13 01:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


MidnightSun Designs wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130109/12/50edd381d558a_m.jpg

here u go

I'm sorry but, no no no no no no!

The crop is off, styling/hair/make up look terrible. Models expression is Not sexy at all. Adding bling is tacky. But I do have to say the lighting is good.

Jan 14 13 01:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Leo Edwards Photography
Posts: 419
Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates


Jan 14 13 01:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Joe Harary wrote:
Feedback Please. Most kind of you.
What do you think of others in my portfolio?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130101/16/50e37eec6afd5_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130101/16/50e37deecea61_m.jpg

Photo 1: just no. Unflattering and doesn't make any sense

Photo2: better.. Though I am disturbed that her body fades into the darkness.
Not a fan of either

Jan 14 13 02:39 pm  Link  Quote 
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