Mike Williams Photo wrote: I was learning a lot from critiques like these but got my mouth ripped (unfairly so in my opinion) out yesterday so I am afraid to venture out again. Oh, what the hell. Give it a go. Welcome to check out the whole port if you feel like it.
NoT a fan.. Rail road tracks and cowboy boots are OVERPLAYED
I hate the concept but it appears all the technical aspects look pretty good.
this shot is so good! i love the wardrobe and thehead piece, i like how you kept her make up relatively soft and i like how you left the negative space at the top!
the only critique i would say is maybe another shot where her body is a bit more separated like legs and arms. but perhaps that was the look you were going for, either way Well done!
this shot is so good! i love the wardrobe and thehead piece, i like how you kept her make up relatively soft and i like how you left the negative space at the top!
the only critique i would say is maybe another shot where her body is a bit more separated like legs and arms. but perhaps that was the look you were going for, either way Well done!
:OOO Thank you so much!
I do have some others like this one where it's more separated! I appreciate the feedback <3
photo 1: NOOOOOOOO
its trash.
not focused properly, and too much noise. Your eyes look scary and your facial expression/pose are not flattering.
photo2: much better! i like this photo, however i think it would be better if you were looking at the camera in a sultry way. Hate your expression as well!
photo 1: her leg is up really high for a bridal photo like kinda of inapropriate haha
other than that i dont have much experience critiquing wedding photos. its a bit under exposed as well
photo 2: i hate it. its a cheesy concept and it wasnt executed well.
1- Not a terrible photo..your dress is blending into whatever you're laying on too much and the angle is a bit weird.
2- the terrible , looks amateur. Bad lighting , bad pose, bad expression, bad angle.
The middle one in my opinion is the best but you REALLLY need to work on your facial expressions. You look as if you don't care to try and you look super boring in all if these. The other two are just terrible on your part expression and pose an on the photographers part technically and cropping
Ok not bad .. You caught her off guard fixing her hair ?
And it looks so.. Not terribly flattering and her hands look weird and are cropped oddly :-/
The model still looks good and I like your black and white , good job. But is that selective color in her eyes? Lose it! It's amateur looking.
Good start so far though
New to this model melarky.
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