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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Mike Williams Photo wrote:
I was learning a lot from critiques like these but got my mouth ripped (unfairly so in my opinion) out yesterday so I am afraid to venture out again. Oh, what the hell. Give it a go. Welcome to check out the whole port if you feel like it.


http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb213/mwilltn/RR1x575_zps51727e6d.jpg

NoT a fan.. Rail road tracks and cowboy boots are OVERPLAYED

I hate the concept but it appears all the technical aspects look pretty good.

Feb 11 13 06:50 am  Link  Quote 
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CEE Productions
Posts: 150
San Antonio, Texas, US


Mine big_smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130209/15/5116df4184bc6_m.jpg
Feb 11 13 12:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130208/19/5115c8e559695_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121129/11/50b7b5bc4218a_m.jpg
Feb 11 13 12:37 pm  Link  Quote 
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Lone Pine Photography
Posts: 38
Savannah, Georgia, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/13/5112c9a70fbb4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130210/22/51188de573c92_m.jpg
Feb 11 13 12:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


CEE Productions wrote:
Mine big_smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130209/15/5116df4184bc6_m.jpg

I loveeeeeee your work!

this shot is so good! i love the wardrobe and thehead piece, i like how you kept her make up relatively soft and i like how you left the negative space at the top!
the only critique i would say is maybe another shot where her body is a bit more separated like legs and arms. but perhaps that was the look you were going for, either way Well done!

Feb 11 13 03:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Scotty2191
Posts: 18
Bradford, England, United Kingdom


Me please? smile New to this model melarky.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111001/05/4e8701fa89b3f_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/14/5112d4747d2d9_m.jpg
Feb 11 13 04:31 pm  Link  Quote 
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AJ_Photography
Posts: 14
Baltimore, Maryland, US


skipped sad
Feb 11 13 04:58 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


AJ_Photography wrote:
Would appreciate your thoughts

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/19/50d91c948e242.jpg

i like the concept but this photo is just entirely too soft..and perhaps its your style but her face look way to light and flat

Feb 11 13 05:59 pm  Link  Quote 
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CEE Productions
Posts: 150
San Antonio, Texas, US


Rachel Reilly wrote:

I loveeeeeee your work!

this shot is so good! i love the wardrobe and thehead piece, i like how you kept her make up relatively soft and i like how you left the negative space at the top!
the only critique i would say is maybe another shot where her body is a bit more separated like legs and arms. but perhaps that was the look you were going for, either way Well done!

:OOO Thank you so much!
I do have some others like this one where it's more separated! I appreciate the feedback

Feb 11 13 06:03 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
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Washington, District of Columbia, US


CEE Productions wrote:

:OOO Thank you so much!
I do have some others like this one where it's more separated! I appreciate the feedback

Feb 11 13 06:10 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,334
Los Angeles, California, US


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Sven Lori
Posts: 276
Brussels, Brussels, Belgium


Feb 12 13 01:27 am  Link  Quote 
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russphoto
Posts: 9
Leeds, England, United Kingdom


Hi. I'm just starting to build a portfolio and wondered if you might like to comment?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31639933
Feb 12 13 03:39 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Ceci L wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130208/19/5115c8e559695_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121129/11/50b7b5bc4218a_m.jpg

photo 1: NOOOOOOOO
its trash.
not focused properly, and too much noise. Your eyes look http://assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/scary.pngand your facial expression/pose are not flattering.

photo2: much better! i like this photo, however i think it would be better if you were looking at the camera in a sultry way. Hate your expression as well!

Feb 12 13 10:34 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
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Washington, District of Columbia, US


Lone Pine Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/13/5112c9a70fbb4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130210/22/51188de573c92_m.jpg

photo 1: her leg is up really high for a bridal photo like kinda of inapropriate haha
other than that i dont have much experience critiquing wedding photos. its a bit under exposed as well

photo 2: i hate it. its a cheesy concept and it wasnt executed well.

Feb 12 13 10:37 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Scotty2191 wrote:
Me please? smile New to this model melarky.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111001/05/4e8701fa89b3f_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/14/5112d4747d2d9_m.jpg

work with better photographers and get a decent hair cut.

Feb 12 13 10:41 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
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Washington, District of Columbia, US


Jorge Kreimer wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 0#31632466 18+

not a fan Jorge!!

i understand this is not conventional but the biggest problem i have with it is its way too under exposed and i wish it was a tab more polished

Feb 12 13 04:21 pm  Link  Quote 
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janine cockerham
Posts: 21
Manchester, England, United Kingdom


Feb 12 13 04:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Boreal Photography
Posts: 292
Vancouver, Washington, US


Critique appreciated / welcome.
http://borealphotography.joogio.com/wp-content/uploads/descritique-e1360718941912.jpg
Feb 12 13 05:25 pm  Link  Quote 
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Kallea
Posts: 77
Knoxville, Tennessee, US


Feb 12 13 07:34 pm  Link  Quote 
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zssphotography
Posts: 56
UPPER DARBY, Pennsylvania, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130212/19/511b022a0521b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130212/19/511b0cf26a373_m.jpg
Feb 12 13 07:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,334
Los Angeles, California, US


RachelReilly wrote:

not a fan Jorge!!

i understand this is not conventional but the biggest problem i have with it is its way too under exposed and i wish it was a tab more polished

All your children can't be winners.

Feb 13 13 04:39 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Jorge Kreimer wrote:

All your children can't be winners.

True!
Haha.. I understand you're just experimenting and playing around and that's how some of the best art is made!

Feb 13 13 05:47 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Henry Carmona
Posts: 5
San Antonio, Texas, US


Thank you for your help.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/10/51129f1ac2b00.jpg
Feb 13 13 07:31 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Hello I'm back from being banned!
Feb 17 13 09:24 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
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Washington, District of Columbia, US


janine cockerham wrote:
hi
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31106738

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31491635

Thanks smile

1- Not a terrible photo..your dress is blending into whatever you're laying on too much and the angle is a bit weird.
2- the terrible , looks amateur. Bad lighting , bad pose, bad expression, bad angle.

Feb 17 13 09:27 am  Link  Quote 
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Toria Royale
Posts: 145
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


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Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Randall_Oelerich wrote:
Critique appreciated / welcome.
http://borealphotography.joogio.com/wp-content/uploads/descritique-e1360718941912.jpg

I don't get this. It's not attractive and it's flat.
Hair in the face isn't working

Feb 17 13 09:40 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Art of V wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31647871
Thank you

Not a bad photo.. Kinda boring though And where's her face?
Nice lighting.

Feb 17 13 09:42 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mae West
Posts: 20
Boston, Massachusetts, US


I'm very new and learning my way. Wouldn't mind an honest impression.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31656085


Thank you.
Feb 17 13 09:56 am  Link  Quote 
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sensual light studios
Posts: 45
Hollywood, Florida, US


Feb 17 13 04:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DRaskin Photography
Posts: 164
Sacramento, California, US


Here's a couple more for your consideration. Love to hear what you think.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130216/01/511f58233f0ed_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130215/21/511f1e2758e7c_m.jpg
Feb 17 13 05:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DRaskin Photography
Posts: 164
Sacramento, California, US


Evidentially accidental double post. Sorry.
Feb 17 13 05:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


zssphotography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130212/19/511b022a0521b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130212/19/511b0cf26a373_m.jpg

Bad photoshop on the second image.

Feb 18 13 09:58 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Henry Carmona wrote:
Thank you for your help.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/10/51129f1ac2b00.jpg

I mean there's nothing really wrong with this technically, hate the crop and the sepia.
The whole pose and expression looks super cheesy.

Feb 18 13 09:59 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Victoria Comeau wrote:
Hi! Here are a couple of photos for your consideration smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30101009

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30104618

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31621769

Thank you!

The middle one in my opinion is the best but you REALLLY need to work on your facial expressions. You look as if you don't care to try and you look super boring in all if these. The other two are just terrible on your part expression and pose an on the photographers part technically and cropping

Feb 18 13 10:04 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Mae West wrote:
I'm very new and learning my way. Wouldn't mind an honest impression.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31656085


Thank you.

Ok not bad .. You caught her off guard fixing her hair ?
And it looks so.. Not terribly flattering and her hands look weird and are cropped oddly  :-/
The model still looks good and I like your black and white , good job. But is that selective color in her eyes? Lose it! It's amateur looking.
Good start so far though

Feb 18 13 10:07 am  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


sensual light studios wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31698384

I do not like this crop, flat lighting, and pose/expression are not flattering!

Feb 18 13 10:09 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Gutschi
Posts: 118
Berlin, Berlin, Germany


Mine please.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/10/51129dd8f0725_m.jpg
Feb 18 13 10:24 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
L Raye
Posts: 5,011
Petaluma, California, US


I'm interested in your thoughts on this one (18+):

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/13 … 2f2469.jpg
Feb 18 13 12:31 pm  Link  Quote 
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