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Alixx Rose
Posts: 225
Atlanta, Georgia, US


I'd love any tips on how to improve my posing, things I need to work on, or anything in my port that hurts more than it helps. Thanks!
Dec 22 12 04:40 pm  Link  Quote 
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ArtistryImage
Posts: 2,706
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Alixx Rose wrote:
...any tips on how to improve my posing...

first and foremost work with a photographer who knows how to direct... seriously

do you have a full length mirror?  it's a model's best friend albeit learn to look away from the lens at a 30 degree angle during a fashion session... they are about the ensemble, avoid eye contact with the lens for fashion...

there is no better way than to start tearing pages out of VOGUE, ELLE etc. and practice the poses till you own them in the mirror... how do you know if you own the pose?  by being able to move into it with your eyes closed... repeatedly...

Dec 24 12 06:43 pm  Link  Quote 
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Acanthus Tattoos
Posts: 414
Union, New Jersey, US


I think it's helpful that you are specific regarding what you will and won't do regarding your dreads and tats, and that you specified the type of shoots your're interested in doing. Love that you are a fire spinner!

Nice smile! (maybe a good pic to use instead for your avatar?? depending on what you want someone to see at a glance, you look younger in this one than in your current avatar in my opinion)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29889819

I think confidence is great but watch for self-flattery, first example is in the end of the first sentence "I am a delight."

Your photos show some versatility of styles/looks, some shots have certain points that could be better and if there is more than one in a series, there are a few you could do away with.

As evidenced by others who expressed opposite opinions from mine in commemts on your photos, not everyone agrees on these points, but some examples are:

I like your ink here but don't love the hand on the head
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29961009

I don't dig the poses in these either
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29902949
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29861943

snapshottey, not as flattering because of shadows and though setting idea might be natural comfy, you have better ones
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30499834

But you have some cool attributes and I look forward to see more of the interesting stuff you wind up doing, ink-sista! smile
Dec 24 12 07:47 pm  Link  Quote 
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