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Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


This is my critique thread, open to anyone. You may ask me anything about your portfolio or profile, the more specific your question, the more precise of an answer I can give you. I will be blunt but I am generally not cruel. If you don't ask a specific question I will only tell you my very first impression of your port.

I am happy to help you delete but I will not tell you what I'd delete from your portfolio if it consists of more than 40 images.

No butthurt allowed. If you think I don't know what I'm talking about and don't care for my opinion then please don't post.

Edit: I'm back at it!
Dec 23 12 11:26 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Catnapping
Posts: 3,771
Brooklyn, New York, US


What do you think my work is missing?
Dec 23 12 11:56 am  Link  Quote 
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 842
Florence, Toscana, Italy


I think we are somehow similar: very rinascimental type... with big brest. I'll be glad to have some advice from you.
Dec 23 12 11:59 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Fotografica Gregor
Posts: 4,068
Alexandria, Virginia, US


your opinion of whatever strikes you about my work will be appreciated

Cheers
Dec 23 12 12:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Black Tux Photography
Posts: 26
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


As others have said, your critique is welcomed / appreciated.
Dec 23 12 12:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 815
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Please tell what I could do to improve my photography.  I shoot what I want and whatever interests me at the time, hence the reasons for my images being all over the place.
Dec 23 12 12:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Nicole Packs
Posts: 257
New York, New York, US


I'm still in the process of submitting to an agency but I'm really just experimenting around and working with different photographers until "I get it."
My question is, am I getting there slowly but surely?
And do you think I'd be of agency standard? Why or why not? smile Thanks!
Dec 23 12 12:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
730372
Posts: 1,952
Abbeville, Alabama, US


Your first impression will do for me please, anything else would be a bonus smile
Dec 23 12 12:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Catnapping wrote:
What do you think my work is missing?

Full body shots.

Just keep shooting and work with more models. I really like the connection your models seem to have with you.

Dec 23 12 12:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
my_other_profile
Posts: 666
Ankeny, Iowa, US


Yes, please -- this account or modeling account at 874543, whichever you'd prefer.
Dec 23 12 12:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


_eMMe_ wrote:
I think we are somehow similar: very rinascimental type... with big brest. I'll be glad to have some advice from you.

Some cool stuff in your portfolio. 4, 7 and 9 strike me as weaker than the rest, I'd lose those.

Your body looks beautiful here, but the fact that the feet are cropped off irks me:
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http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30608066

Dec 23 12 12:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Fotografica Gregor wrote:
your opinion of whatever strikes you about my work will be appreciated

Cheers

A lot of your work is nice, so I'll just tell you what the first few things are I notice that I don't like.

I am not a fan of the silhouettes.

I've critiqued this  before:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120414/19/4f8a3825141fa_m.jpg
All I see is ear, sorry. This would have been a good shot if the hair had covered the ear, but the way it is I find it really unflattering.

Make-up crimes:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/19/50d52dbff1319_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121206/20/50c1749b73254_m.jpg

Among your much nicer work there are quite a few snap shots that are not up to par with what I think you are capable of, mostly near the end of your portfolio. You could delete quite a lot.

Dec 23 12 01:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Fotografica Gregor
Posts: 4,068
Alexandria, Virginia, US


Babalon Salome wrote:

A lot of your work is nice, so I'll just tell you what the first few things are I notice that I don't like.

I am not a fan of the silhouettes.

I've critiqued this  before:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120414/19/4f8a3825141fa_m.jpg
All I see is ear, sorry. This would have been a good shot if the hair had covered the ear, but the way it is I find it really unflattering.

Make-up crimes:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/19/50d52dbff1319_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121206/20/50c1749b73254_m.jpg

Among your much nicer work there are quite a few snap shots that are not up to par with what I think you are capable of, mostly near the end of your portfolio. You could delete quite a lot.

Thank you -

I do admit to keeping some older images that I just like, even though they are not my best work - I really do need to address that...     thank you for allowing me to see some of my work through your eyes.....

Dec 23 12 01:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Laurian Ene
Posts: 5
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


I'd like to hear about my portfolio maybe one photo you like and why, and one photo you hate and why yikes

(execpt maybe my self portrait)
Dec 23 12 01:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


BlackTUX Photography wrote:
As others have said, your critique is welcomed / appreciated.

I'd delete 3 (personally I find recreated ads tacky) and 4 (snapshot), that will immediately make your port stronger.

Dec 23 12 02:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 3,342
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


What do you see in my work.
Does it strike you one way or the other and what would you delete

Thank you
Dec 23 12 02:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


TDSImages wrote:
Please tell what I could do to improve my photography.  I shoot what I want and whatever interests me at the time, hence the reasons for my images being all over the place.

Study framing/cropping. You tend to crop off hands and feet awkwardly.

The cropping here is weird, for example, I would have liked to see the feet or the hem of the dress:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120320/07/4f6893c8a5340_m.jpg

Dec 23 12 02:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Me-L
Posts: 108
New York, New York, US


I would like to know your thoughts. I already know that I need to work on my expressions, but what else can enhance my portfolio. I plan on losing about ten pounds, what type of modeling do you think will fit me better after the transformation?
Dec 23 12 02:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Nicole Packs  wrote:
I'm still in the process of submitting to an agency but I'm really just experimenting around and working with different photographers until "I get it."
My question is, am I getting there slowly but surely?
And do you think I'd be of agency standard? Why or why not? smile Thanks!

You do not need professional photos to submit to an agency. They want polaroids. Attending an open call would be your best bet.

What do I think? On MM you would be referred to as agency standard. Your face is pretty and interesting, but I am not sure it strikes me as editorial. I think you can probably get signed by a smaller agency, but as for the top 10 ones in NYC I have no clue. You are still young enough but aren't getting any younger, so I say approach agencies NOW, ideally by both submitting polaroids and attending open calls.

If you want to be agency signed it doesn't really matter what I think or what anyone else on here thinks, though, ultimately only agencies have answers for you.

Dec 23 12 03:01 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


T B O L wrote:
Your first impression will do for me please, anything else would be a bonus smile

I really like your work. I'd trade with you.

Two things I found I didn't like:

This is unflattering for the model (huge double chin - I wonder why photographers so often overlook this?):
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www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30898395

This I think it's just weaker than the rest of your port:
www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21795014

Dec 23 12 03:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Beth Chambers
Posts: 465
London, England, United Kingdom


Would like to know your impressions of my profile smile
Dec 23 12 04:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
730372
Posts: 1,952
Abbeville, Alabama, US


Babalon Salome wrote:

I really like your work. I'd trade with you.

Thankyou, and likewise smile

Babalon Salome wrote:
This is unflattering for the model (huge double chin - I wonder why photographers so often overlook this?):
18+
www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30898395

Sadly I hadn't noticed that until you pointed it out. Deleted, thanks.

Babalon Salome wrote:
This I think it's just weaker than the rest of your port:
www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21795014

TBH I only kept that one as it generates random messages advising me to remove it (due to the rail tracks) which I found mildly amusing. It's gone now though.

Thanks again smile

Dec 23 12 04:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


my_other_profile wrote:
Yes, please -- this account or modeling account at 874543, whichever you'd prefer.

Well, lots of snapshots.

This I really dig, neat concept:
18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11323214

This is neat, your best picture:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090205/19/498bb3dde25a0_m.jpg

Photoshop crime, also I don't really understand it:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100120/22/4b57f965f2c9e_m.jpg

Dec 23 12 07:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jhomel
Posts: 180
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


First shoot and quite a newbie afterall..how can I improve better? Or prob the strength n weakness in my pic etc..
Dec 23 12 07:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Laurian Ene wrote:
I'd like to hear about my portfolio maybe one photo you like and why, and one photo you hate and why yikes

(execpt maybe my self portrait)

Snap shottish - weird composition and expression, also what is the model doing?
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110910/16/4e6befc21db93_m.jpg

Good lighting, nice tones:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110910/16/4e6bef85d6693_m.jpg

Dec 23 12 07:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jackson frontier photos
Posts: 531
Joplin, Missouri, US


What's my best and worst image and why?
Dec 23 12 08:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Oakville Studios 1
Posts: 277
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Do you like my clean style or do you find it boring.  what pic would be think is my best?
Dec 23 12 08:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Rik Image wrote:
What do you see in my work.
Does it strike you one way or the other and what would you delete

Thank you

I dig a lot of your work, especially your nudes, you know how to make the female form look good. I like how dynamic a lot of the poses are.

I can only see a few I'd delete right away:

Duckface (!), boring compared to the rest of your port, don't like the tones and the wardrobe at all either:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120925/00/5061643abbb1a_m.jpg

I like neither the model's expression, the make-up, the hat, nor the tones, also I think it's boring:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111101/00/4eafa18c46e1f_m.jpg

I dislike this for similar reasons:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111101/00/4eafa1a188872_m.jpg

This doesn't fit well with the rest of your port, the male model isn't actually modeling, which I find distracting:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120610/05/4fd492fe3e05c_m.jpg

Dec 23 12 08:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Michael Gaffney
Posts: 48
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


As an amateur, I realize that my port "is all over the place".  I am interested in what you might see as my strong suit.

Any that must be deleted?

Thanks in advance,
Michael
Dec 23 12 08:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Barely StL
Posts: 765
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


I'd love to hear what you think.
Dec 23 12 08:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,499
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Me-L wrote:
I would like to know your thoughts. I already know that I need to work on my expressions, but what else can enhance my portfolio. I plan on losing about ten pounds, what type of modeling do you think will fit me better after the transformation?

I can see you doing glamour and commercial. You are a bit short for fashion but you could still attend open calls and submit polaroids and see what agencies have to say, theirs is the only opinion that matters anyway.

For commercial you might want to start by getting yourself a really good headshot of you smiling.

Dec 23 12 08:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Shelbiee Savage
Posts: 126
Gainesville, Florida, US


Let's do this! ^_^
Dec 23 12 08:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Laurian Ene
Posts: 5
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


Cheers thanks for taking the time!
Dec 23 12 09:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 3,342
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Thank you Babalon Salome, I'll definitely take your critique into consideration.
I hope you have a most wonderful and Merry Xmas X
Dec 23 12 09:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kelly Ann Carter
Posts: 93
Hollywood, Florida, US


Do you like my photos? What do you think about this one? http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/12 … 5172dc.jpg
Dec 23 12 09:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Makeup Artist
Eloise Sarah
Posts: 7
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Hey, im pretty new to MM, im a makeup artist.. wouldn't mind hearing some feedback ..
Dec 24 12 12:41 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Autumn Rose Brightly
Posts: 1,097
Crowley, Texas, US


Would love your thoughts smile
Dec 24 12 12:44 am  Link  Quote 
Model
HEATHER 19
Posts: 1,132
Boston, Massachusetts, US


How am I doing
Dec 24 12 05:35 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 815
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Babalon Salome wrote:

Study framing/cropping. You tend to crop off hands and feet awkwardly.

The cropping here is weird, for example, I would have liked to see the feet or the hem of the dress:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120320/07/4f6893c8a5340_m.jpg

Thank You!!

Dec 24 12 08:48 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jhomel
Posts: 180
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


Dec 24 12 07:07 pm  Link  Quote 
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