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Photographer
GNapp Studios
Posts: 5,751
Somerville, New Jersey, US


What is the best "M" rated picture in my port?
Dec 27 12 04:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,123
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Zombie Eye Photography wrote:
I'd love to hear a german opinion on my work!

The lighting, make-up and angle are unflattering for the model:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121011/21/5077a11a4365e_m.jpg

Weird lighting and composition, also I don't understand it:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121006/01/506fed58a2b1c_m.jpg

The rest of your work is pretty nice.

Dec 27 12 05:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,123
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


TheMoonflower wrote:
Could I get a critique?

Learn to do make-up, buy a wardrobe, work with better photographers.

Get rid of the pictures that show you with the longer hair you don't have anymore.

Dec 27 12 05:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ann77
Posts: 133
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Babalon Salome wrote:

Your port is good. Going in a commercial direction sounds like a good plan to me.

So I will only comment on what I don't likeThe yellowish tones here I don't like, also I don't think the expression in the second one is very flattering for you:

Thank you so much for your time!  Hopefully I will have some better smiling pics soon!  Appreciate the critique!

Dec 27 12 06:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,123
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


CireStudios wrote:
Would love to know what you think of my port and also let me know what you think I should do more of.

Your port doesn't seem very consistent to me, there are glorified snapshots next to some really nice work.

I'll tell you what I don't like about this as an example:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120117/12/4f15e0bcd9c3a_m.jpg
The orange (fake?) tan of the skin clashes horribly with the pink shirt, the lighting is flat, the make-up is a crime, the expression and pose... don't make much sense and don't flatter the model.

Do more of these, the mood, use of light and tones are lovely:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110712/20/4e1d0a4bc85ce_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110715/07/4e204b61d6532_m.jpg

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16561071

Dec 28 12 02:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
sospix
Posts: 19,834
Orlando, Florida, US


Does my port's content seem too scattered to you  .  .  .  or, does it show that I shoot a wide array of styles  .  .  .  and, which attracts you to shoot with a photographer, variety, or a single stream of images based on one style  .  .  .  TY for your time  .  .  .

SOS
Dec 28 12 02:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Imageography
Posts: 6,452
Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada


Babalon Salome wrote:

Isn't that basically a question of concept as well as working with the right type of model and stylists who can pull clothing for fashion/editorial? You seem to know what you are doing.

Thanks, it doesn't feel like I know, but I appreciate that it seems that way

Dec 28 12 02:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cristal Bell
Posts: 22
Newport News, Virginia, US


Babalon Salome wrote:

How come your nick is Cristal and in your bio it says Crystal?

Strenghts: physically, the face, especially the eyes and lips, and the boobs. You're sexy and your expressions are good.

You seem to know what you are doing. Maybe get more full body shots of you standing?

The last picture is the worst in your port, I'd delete it.

Thank you for your feedback. I go by crystal but when signing up for this account my original name was taken. I'll remedy that. Thank you

Dec 29 12 01:34 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,123
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Vanisa Dimitrova wrote:
Please let me know what I should delete from my portfolio.

You could delete these:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121227/15/50dcdaf6899bf_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121228/01/50dd682a96d96_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121228/01/50dd6844cdc9c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090211/16/499366cb4d1f8_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090620/15/4a3d60ddc52dd_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081008/18/48ed32fef00a6_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091011/21/4ad2b6e1a8d39_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110922/22/4e7c17bacae21_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100108/15/4b47bd1287c78_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091221/14/4b2ff8bfe2140_m.jpg

Dec 29 12 03:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kelly Ann Carter
Posts: 91
Hollywood, Florida, US


do you like my portfolio?
Dec 29 12 03:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,123
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


GNapp Studios wrote:
What is the best "M" rated picture in my port?

This is the best:
18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28806964

Dec 29 12 03:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,123
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Kelly Ann Carter wrote:
do you like my portfolio?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?threa … st17856521

Dec 29 12 03:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,123
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


sospix wrote:
Does my port's content seem too scattered to you  .  .  .  or, does it show that I shoot a wide array of styles  .  .  .  and, which attracts you to shoot with a photographer, variety, or a single stream of images based on one style  .  .  .  TY for your time  .  .  .

SOS

It's certainly not too scattered, it looks fine to me.

As long as the quality of images in a portfolio is consistent, I don't mind either way, but the advantage of working with a photographer with a distinctive style is having a better idea beforehand of how the pictures might turn out.

Dec 29 12 03:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Vanisa Dimitrova
Posts: 1,132
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Thank you! Happy new year smile
Jan 01 13 06:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Babalon Salome
Posts: 3,123
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Still going.
Jan 02 13 09:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
sospix
Posts: 19,834
Orlando, Florida, US


Babalon Salome wrote:

It's certainly not too scattered, it looks fine to me.

As long as the quality of images in a portfolio is consistent, I don't mind either way, but the advantage of working with a photographer with a distinctive style is having a better idea beforehand of how the pictures might turn out.

Thanks for the look, and the input  .  .  .  I try not to let the sample images get too far afield, but I also don't want to limit the models that may be interested in shooting with me  .  .  .  having a few fashion, a few urban, a few beach, and a few nudes seems to be a pretty good balance, but it's always good to hear what others are seeing in the presentation as well  .  .  .

SOS

Jan 04 13 07:24 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dontez Akins
Posts: 185
Douglasville, Georgia, US


I would like to know what you think about my work
Jan 04 13 04:44 pm  Link  Quote 
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