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Zman-Photog
Posts: 19
Missouri City, Texas, US


I have recently added quite a few pics to my portfolio and need some feedback on what to cut. Please provide feedback.

Thanks,
Dan
Dec 25 12 11:08 am  Link  Quote 
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Veit Photo
Posts: 667
London, England, United Kingdom


I think you should change your avatar to start with - it doesn't reflect your style.
Also get rid of the kid looking at the terracotta army as it sends out confusing signals.
If you want to have a really compact portfolio, cut it back to the best shot from each shoot.
Dec 25 12 12:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
LA StarShooter
Posts: 1,797
Los Angeles, California, US


Zman-Photog wrote:
I have recently added quite a few pics to my portfolio and need some feedback on what to cut. Please provide feedback.

Thanks,
Dan

It's a lot of work. I would rather just leave comments on photos that I like and you could delete the comments later. "This" for I like. "Kill" for I don't like.Compiling a list on Xmas day just takes so, so long. Merry Xmas.

Dec 25 12 12:56 pm  Link  Quote 
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David J Martin
Posts: 456
Amberg, Bavaria, Germany


You have a lot of repeats.  Many photos from a single shoot, many photos where models are in similar poses.  If you're looking to trim back, that's what I'd do. 

Beautiful port by the way.
Dec 25 12 01:00 pm  Link  Quote 
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STUDIO2401
Posts: 1,335
Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines


you don't need us for that. Remove photos that look similar. Keep the ones you find best.
Dec 25 12 03:06 pm  Link  Quote 
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Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,543
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120819/14/50315cf44b10f_m.jpg
You have cut off the models fingers
Missing models left arm altogether
Details hair band on wrist
Forehead looks dark compared to cheeks
Hair messy on models right side
Over all image lacks pop, could us a reflector or additional light next time
This would be one to start with for removal

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120819/14/50315acf13081_m.jpg
There is a new campaign to save models hands; it called “The new composition revolution”
Bit excessive on head tilt a little goes a long way
Second nomination for removal
Dec 26 12 09:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Zman-Photog
Posts: 19
Missouri City, Texas, US


Thanks for the input
Dec 26 12 04:03 pm  Link  Quote 
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