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angel emily
Posts: 1,020
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Go.
Dec 30 12 02:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph William
Posts: 1,994
Chicago, Illinois, US


Based on your avi I expected a beginner profile.  I was pleasantly surprised to find some great images in your port.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121220/07/50d3298782436_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/14/50a2cae579669_m.jpg
Dec 30 12 02:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Pinup Fantasies
Posts: 1,034
HIXSON, Tennessee, US


Joseph

Beautiful work with sunset beach shots. The lighting has a nice natural feel to it.
Dec 30 12 04:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cynthia Serrano
Posts: 12,466
Newark, New Jersey, US


Pinup

Love the characters in your photos and also the whole execution of the photo and story being told smile
Dec 30 12 07:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
FootNote Fotography
Posts: 18,809
Olympia, Washington, US


Cynthia Serrano  wrote:

Your "About Me" section has a lot of great stuff in it, but it makes me not want to read it because you have to scroll side to side. Might want to think about re-formating that area.

Dec 30 12 09:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Autumn Rose Brightly
Posts: 1,097
Crowley, Texas, US


FootNote Fotography wrote:

Your "About Me" section has a lot of great stuff in it, but it makes me not want to read it because you have to scroll side to side. Might want to think about re-formating that area.

I love your portfolio, the shots are gorgeous smile I'd be interested to see some more colors though

Dec 30 12 10:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Body Painter
BodyPainter Rich
Posts: 17,872
Sacramento, California, US


Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:

I love your portfolio, the shots are gorgeous smile I'd be interested to see some more colors though

I would like to see a bit more in the way of facial expression and engaging the camera emotionally. Your photos are fine, but lack emotional impact to get the viewer engaged.

Dec 30 12 10:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Fist Full of Ish
Posts: 1,912
Oak Ridge, Tennessee, US


BodyPainter Rich wrote:

I would like to see a bit more in the way of facial expression and engaging the camera emotionally. Your photos are fine, but lack emotional impact to get the viewer engaged.

How am I supposed to critique a body paiter?
OK.  'Too much painting nipples!  'Baby wants a snack.  What's he get?  A mouth full of paint chips!
"Seriously though, it looks good, but I thing more shadow details would give needed depth in some cases.

Dec 31 12 12:00 am  Link  Quote 
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 842
Florence, Toscana, Italy


Technically great shots and quite original, but stop doing composite, just choose one shot per shooting.
Dec 31 12 01:43 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Meisterstuecke
Posts: 215
Bregenz, Vorarlberg, Austria


You show quite a range of feelings - but not one shot where you are happy, smiling, portraying fun etc.

Herbert
Dec 31 12 03:26 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 3,332
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Meisterstuecke wrote:
You show quite a range of feelings - but not one shot where you are happy, smiling, portraying fun etc.

Herbert

I do enjoy B/w nudes under dramatic lighting, however the weapon theme is a big distraction for me

Dec 31 12 06:39 am  Link  Quote 
Model
angel emily
Posts: 1,020
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Rik Image wrote:
I do enjoy B/w nudes under dramatic lighting, however the weapon theme is a big distraction for me

I don't think this shot matches the quality of the rest of your photos (which are amazing):

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090323/18/49c834afa234d_m.jpg

I understand why you'd want to keep it (cool setting, cool contrast, cool colors) but it's really not of the same caliber, IMO!  Plus, I hate that the llama isn't wearing shoes! :x

Dec 31 12 07:29 am  Link  Quote 
Model
MatureModelMM
Posts: 955
Detroit, Michigan, US


The polaroid style picture just does not do you justice at all. You have much better work.

I simply love how beautiful you look in the one your brother took

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121112/10/50a13f64daf60_m.jpg
Dec 31 12 07:32 am  Link  Quote 
Model
B E A R
Posts: 474
Riverside, California, US


I think you should work on your posing and start working with better photographers. I think it'd really help.
Dec 31 12 10:08 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
OmnyRa
Posts: 1,029
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


Bear wrote:
I think you should work on your posing and start working with better photographers. I think it'd really help.

Out of your 15 pics, 11 have your hand coming to your head or face in one form or another, and that suggests you're playing it safe in your posing.
I think you should really push yourself and step outside your comfort zone. Get in front of that mirror and shake things up a little! :^)

Jan 01 13 01:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
photos by dante
Posts: 89
New York, New York, US


OmnyRa - Technically solid...I think some of the poses are awkrard, especialy given the context in which they were shot.  Natural settings / Unnatural poses.
Jan 01 13 03:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Patrick Shipstad
Posts: 4,617
Burbank, California, US


Photos By Dante

Nice work.. if I had any constructive criticism, I'd suggest directing more expressive facial expressions out of your llamas. They all seem to have the same look on their faces.. So much is in the eyes, a smirk, a raised eyebrow, etc that takes a shot from ordinary to more intriguing.. My favorite shots in your portfolio is the girl sitting down and laughing!

I wish you continued success! Happy New Year :-)

Patrick
Jan 01 13 03:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
EdwardKristopher
Posts: 3,353
Tempe, Arizona, US


You have an awful lot of "Friends!"
Jan 18 13 07:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
lynden
Posts: 8,562
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


EdwardKristopher wrote:
You have an awful lot of "Friends!"

Your work is nice, if a little flat.  If you can't find assistants or don't have access to grip tools to help you with reflectors and flags, consider introducing some dodging and burning in post.

Jan 19 13 08:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
photos by dante
Posts: 89
New York, New York, US


lyndens wrote:

Your work is nice, if a little flat.  If you can't find assistants or don't have access to grip tools to help you with reflectors and flags, consider introducing some dodging and burning in post.

Really Good stuff.

Why the hell is this:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080810/21/489f933edec35_m.jpg
And this:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080113/12/478a464e4d969_m.jpg
in your port?  Brings down the overall quality.

Jan 19 13 08:26 am  Link  Quote 
Makeup Artist
Sea-Bee FX
Posts: 17
Lewisville, Texas, US


Photos by Dante:

I really love your use of back lighting in most of your photos, but some of the posing with the models could be changed up. I think you could get even more dynamic shots in a similar set up.
Jan 20 13 05:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nam Vuong
Posts: 56
Calgary, Alberta, Canada


Very intense effects and amazing texture and use of colors
Jan 21 13 08:37 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 7,017
New York, New York, US


You are off to very good start. Good lighting and focus. The only issue I find is that the cropping on two photos, first row, the second one. The llamas hand seems to get my attention more because it's bright and by itself. The third photo she is missing her hands. Just feels awkward to me. Aside from that you are on the right track with your technical skills. Nothing else really to pick on.
Jan 21 13 08:48 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Pay better attention to detail, in general
Jan 21 13 12:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 3,332
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Rachel Reilly wrote:
Pay better attention to detail, in general

Love the new avi smile

Jan 21 13 04:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,253
Los Angeles, California, US


Rik Image wrote:

Love the new avi smile

You are an extremely good technician, but too safe in your choices. Would love to see you go wild.

Jan 21 13 04:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Rik Image wrote:
Love the new avi smile

Love yours!

Jan 21 13 04:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,253
Los Angeles, California, US


Rachel Reilly wrote:

Love yours!
Jan 21 13 05:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Shhh
Don't undermine my critique!
Your portfolio is lovely so I just said a random critique
Jan 21 13 05:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,253
Los Angeles, California, US


Rachel Reilly wrote:
Shhh
Don't undermine my critique!
Your portfolio is lovely so I just said a random critique

Ok, thank you for your kind words.

Jan 21 13 06:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Amul La La
Posts: 804
Plymouth, England, United Kingdom


Your model/pose/movement work seems more real and expressive, as appose to contrived (;
Jan 22 13 04:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Thalia Storm
Posts: 6
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


You take lovely photos although your concepts aren't very creative and it would be cool if you had some photos that are un like any others out there, I like the picture with the horse in it. smile
Jan 28 13 06:43 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,253
Los Angeles, California, US


You are very pretty, but get some photos taken by good photographers.
They look like snapshots.
Jan 28 13 07:31 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dd photography
Posts: 862
San Diego, California, US


Great, amazing, fresh, different. Love your work!

Too many images though, cull 'em down. Especially from the same look.
Jan 28 13 07:44 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Great, beautiful images.
Perhaps too many though, narrow it down!
Jan 28 13 08:36 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Affinity Finch
Posts: 652
Bodmin, England, United Kingdom


Rachel
I ADORE your port!
Your B+W's are amazing I'd give almost anything to work with you! Great job.
I also love this one smile
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31280181
More like this please x
Jan 28 13 09:04 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
I Ference Photography
Posts: 1,152
Rochester, New York, US


You have a nice beginning to a port going.  But beware overprocessing - images like this make me slap my forehead...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121127/03/50b4a7c9bcb5e_m.jpg
Jan 28 13 08:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Mary Geraldine
Posts: 1,696
Valdese, North Carolina, US


I Ference Photography wrote:

Your portfolio is absolutely astounding. The only thing I see to critique is that there is something missing. Me. big_smile

Jan 28 13 09:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jayc Yu
Posts: 526
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


There's a nice variety of styles
Jan 29 13 10:46 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


Love the dreamy feeling in all your pics. Maybe too many blue ones.
Jan 29 13 10:48 am  Link  Quote 
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