Mark Laubenheimer wrote:
focus on the girl first and foremost. she's beautiful. think about her expression. her face, her eyes, is an expression. her pose is also an expression. i agree also with the comments about the broken hand. it just seems awkward.
all of that said, the photos are far from terrible. you definitely have talent that just needs to be nurtured, and that comes with practice, and more practice. but you will get there. being an artist is a journey. take it one day at a time.
Yeah, in case that wasn't clear from my comments. I don't think the images are bad, but for serious critique the most useful thing to point out are the flaws, not what you did right.