Unveiled Beauty wrote:
Hey fellow mmrs, I'm new here and I would like some opinions on my profile and my pictures. Thanks
A bit cruel to be kind. I think you could use with some rather drastic changes to your port/profile. First, your portfolio doesn't say "Experienced" to me. In fact you say in your profile:
"I'm looking to gain experience along with building my portfolio.
I love being in front of the camera and I'm always open to direction from the photographer. " But together with the images, I would be turned off as a photographer by someone that "over selling" themselves. This has nothing to do with how you look, but the quality of the images.
But back to the port, the images are not very strong. Of the whole port this is my favorite:
I like how it shows your definition, and the fact that you are facing away shows some mystery. However, the big shoe prints on the floor really ruin this image for me. It's amateurish to leave that large of a flaw in the image and I would request that the photographer provide some minimal post work to clean it up.
The next few:
I appreciate that this is trying for a mystery look, however the sodium yellow is unattractive IMO. Even worse, this image along with the rest of the set, show you very poorly by showing either your beauty nor your expression or pose.
This brighter image with softer lighting is much better for you.
While your legs are fabulous here, we can hardly see an expression, and the pose with that top doesn't work.
Here your tan lines are working against you. Again the image quality is very poor with no detail in the hair, and just a very fuzzy and out of focus look.
Over all, your portfolio isn't really showing your ability to pose. It does not show a range of expression, or an ability to project emotion. I think your portfolio could do much better with stronger photographers that could showcase you better.