The first seven in my port are new today -- some are duplicates.  If you don't mind, what needs cut, why, and what do I need to work on going forward?

Still having some focus issues, I think.

No I don't think you have focus issues, in fact most of them seem quite strong.

You have a nice variety which is good too.

No major complaints, I think composition and making the model's pose stronger is what you could work on but that is quite good already.

Thank you