The couple of things that stand out to me are your connection with the camera and your expressions. There is a connection, but it seems tenuous. Maybe because I'm a guy, but I just don't feel your connection in all of them as strong as in others.
Part of that may be due to you having almost the same expression in many of the shots. The one where you are laughing is great. Work on getting more of that natural comfort and confidence coming through consistently.
The shot coming out of the water looks like something out of a CK ad. Fantastic shot and perfect pose on that one.
well all your photos look very amateurish and dont serve you all that well. You need some good commercial print shots- you doing stuff and being very approachable/friendly. You should bite the bullet spend a few hundred dollars and immediately be competitive in the non MM arena. Nice body shots of you in yoga poses and with a woman would be a good place to start.